Reviews for The Bauble |
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![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! This is a great story and I really want to know what happens next and when Harlock is (hopefully) alright again! |
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![]() ![]() Harlock is gonna scare the hell out of everyone when he wakes up right |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you very much for updating. I find myself immensely curious as to what the orb does, and I hope it will be explained in the next few chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you will show the dark side of my Bob, huh? I think it will be very interesting... Great chapter, btw. I enjoyed it much, especially the way you describe the travel of our pirate knight. And I love your AI, too. Keep writing! A. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this new chapter and welcome back! And now, I want to know when Harlock will be safe... ;-) |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this new chapter. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading the end of the story. |
![]() ![]() Please, have mercy on us : continue to write ! I really enjoyed this beginning and I am craving for the next chapters ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Bob is so brave! What a wonderful character! ; Seems it will be some troubles aboard the Arcadia soon, huh? Still happy to read you! A. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always happy to read your chapters ' I enjoyed to see Harlock working for Bob (and Bob still calling him 'kid'...). Hope the next chapter will come soon - don't let our captain near to death too long... Good job and keep writing! A. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey ! YOU CAN'T Stop there ! We need the next chapter ! Well, good job. Ps :I want anti-inebriation pills, very useful ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Captivating and very well written! It was a pleasure to read. Harlock invulnerable but sensitive .. He will use the orb of the two sisters? Ah, Diesel and his claustrophobia, very funny ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good work. With humor and with Bob :-) Very pleasant to read this short story, and, of course, I quote Aerandir "all that to see the captain wet and without his clothes. It seems it's the secret wish of all the ladies here" Thank you for your author's note. ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This time it was difficult to follow this story with the translator, I had to read several times to arrive at the end. I liked well seeing Toshiro in action, and of course a very relevant come loss of clothes for fangirls! And I liked seeing Bob, it is really the great guest-star of fics Harlock! On the other hand, I loved not too much Franz. I would have seen something more mythical, like Siegfried...why not Franz, if needed but for me that sounds very bizarrely Thank you and congratulations for this history(story), Patnkaz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great. Really. I enjoyed the story very much. Action, women, humor - it was a pleasant break during a hard work period. I know I didn't review older stories. I have to do it. I will do it, I swear. Can I have a 48h-long day, please? Bob thanks you to appear as a guest star. It's a long time I didn't write a story with him, so he is happy to have a walk in yours. And you write the character very well. Thanks for that. I think I will keep 'Franz' for the captain, if you agree. It fits him well, after all. And I like it. Well, all that to see the captain wet and without his clothes. It seems it's the secret wish of all the ladies here. Good job A. |