Reviews for Pair the Spare
Coyote Laughs chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Ugh,

I love me some Luna, and you seem to hit an aspect of Luna that I haven't seen anybody hit upon, just a spare...

I like your writing style, and I like how you write Luna, in all her aspects...

And I like the reasoning you put for her and Rolf to be together, they just sort of fell in together, not in love or anything, but by chance...

Great story... great writing style...

Coyote
happyhooligan2001 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
I never really understood the marriage between Luna and Rolf Scamander. It just seemed like a last minute thing tossed into the back of the book. I prefered the movie where she and Neville were together at the end. After all they had trained together and fought together, they belonged together.

Personally I think Luna would be catch for anyone. Wish I had been in that Muggle bar.
Readerjkr chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Very well written, a bit on the sad side. I'm glad there is some happiness over the years though. Thanks for sharing.
harmonyforever12 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Awww! Poor Luna! Good story, though! :)
Wrexscar chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
A well written short, sad and sweet little fic. I liked it.
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
This is sad,

A good fic,

But still sad...
Lia Kada chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
awww this makes me sad. but it's really well written; the last line is so powerful!
Little Sis chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Ahhh that was sad and sweet. I don't morn for the what could have been's for Luna though, because for two little 3rd years she'll always be #1.
MandibleBones chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
I cannot review this one-shot right now, as I appear to have something in my eye.
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Oh, poor Luna! I love how you had Ginny try to make Luna and Neville get together. I can just picture that. Also I agree with Rolf being older-I see that, too. This fic really makes the reader feel bad for Luna. Great job.
Lord of Murder chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Aw now I'm sad.
the grey mage chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
This was fucking depressing and hit way too close to home, for me.
chromate chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Like the story a lot. I love the way you portray Luna as the 'leftover' but that she didn't resent this idea. She simply let things flow and let people around her be themselves, while she is just...well, Luna.
macabre-wolf chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
jajaja excelente, excelente mi hermano, amo los fics de Luna me parece que tiene una personalidad tan unica... que con el tiempo se convierte en encantadora y por eso entiendo perfectamente que evanna lynch se enamorara de Luna... buen capitulo y sabes que yo como muchos estamos esperando una actualizacion de la siguiente, jaja un saludo
red-jacobson chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Well, that was sad, that's for sure, but well written. I'm glad you don't spend a lot of time working with the canon pairings, because those really suck! *GRIN*

red
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