Reviews for One Piece: Up in Smoke!
Psycho Nocturnal chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
I beg you, the curiosity is now killing me
It's been almost 3 years, so I hope you still have the inspiration and motivation to continue this, this is so cutee
I'm not trying to force you to continue!
Though if you will that will be great!
Good luck with your stories :3
asura.keji chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
CrystalVixen93 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Love ur story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.
Molly chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Can not wait for the next chapter
onepiecefannumber1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
onyx roxanne chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
i like it very much! and ignore the stupid people who dont like mixing things up! up date soon!
YukiNeko chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
*Blush* KAWAII!
lunarmidnightwolf chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
love it lol wish there was more to the adventure part though :)
ZenDen chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
hey : long time reader, first time reviewer , I think .

as I'm not a very experienced reviewer I'll try do do it right (hopefully).

I really liked this story! a luffy marine is rare( in my case it is ) and using blades, I wonder tho, how will she interact with zoro now ? or is he even in this story to begin with. would be fun to see then in a friendlyrival or enemyrival, or would they go on to become king of blades and she queen of blades ? haha random.

anyway i'm not sure how I feel about smokeyxluffy but I'll leave that up to more experienced minds to figure out :p.

again, love the story ! hope to see more in the future :}

zenDen out!
Kyoya kumo chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Add moreeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee
DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.

When will you continue this story?

I want to know what will happen next in the story.

When will they fall in LOVE?
Shiary chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
lol very unique :)
caly521 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
LOVED IT! gatta love fangirls
PortgasDAva chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Really cute! i hope you continue this!
KitsuneNaru chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
very interesting, but i do hope that the relationship between luffy and smoker develops slowly to make it more realistic.
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