Reviews for Hero: The Price
cytpotter chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Wow! I really liked this story! Even though I didn't leave a review for the first story I liked it as well! I thought you wrote the charactors very well! I really liked the idea of this story as well! Great job!
francis2 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Poor Joe and Fiona. After all they went through. Is there another part?
Shakespeare's Lemonade chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Aw! That's so sad. I'm glad she was in on it though. In so many stories the guy breaks up with the girl for her own good, but doesn't tell her what's really going on. I like the way you did it much better. I hope you plan on a final installment. Great job with this.