|Reviews for Breathless Persuasion|
| Myrkvun Rautsson chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
You, miss, are the most creative yaoi smut writer I've ever seen. For that, I salute you for writing this.
| cvbnrtyhj chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
| SkittzLuvzGee chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
That was absolutely amazing! Oh my goodness! Hot, sexy, kinky, fun! Oh, you don't know how much I completely enjoyed it. And your writing is remarkable, oh my! You are truly amazing, I must say. And I don't think I could even choose a favorite part!
| Hi chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Question: Can this be considered as part 2 of Choking on Your Alibi?
| WOW chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Ok Alfie, what did you do to make him "punish" like this? Whatever it is, do it again! :D
| Closet Cleaner chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
ERMAGERHD! This was the best thing that ever happened to that pipe! :D LoveloveLOVED it! I love your RusAme fics! You write the most original and smutty fics! Can't tell you how sexy this fic was!
| RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I have to choose a single part? This was all bloody amazing!
| ShotgunRedneck chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Dear god this was AMAZING! X3 Will there be a sequal? C:
| xxcherirabbitxx chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I sorta always pictured their sex like this in one point. Thank you for such a streamy read.
| Mj Poe chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
All of it was my favorite part :D America IS such a slut xD I tip my hat to you for writing this awesomeness.
| jafucked up chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Kyaaah! His hesitance growing into desperation was just so lovely... I believe now that I am more sadist than masochist. Bravo Zulu, recruit!
| Sexykill69 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Gah! / Can't believe I read non-fluffy sex...Oh god! I umm...I would like to see it continued...I think I liked when he put the *ehem* Plug in the best.
| nicsnort chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I'm in yaoi daze right now, hubahubahuba!
| Mizore no Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
| Sailor Taichichi Vegeta chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I liked the part with the Ruski exerting his dominance from that chair!
Alfred, what the heck did you steal to get this kind of treatment?