| Reviews for The Pureblood Pretense |
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  It's Areeba-Sama chapter 4 . 4/25 Ok, I can see where the problem is. That wand probably belong to Archie, and hens it didn't worked for Rigel. They exchanged everything including their wands, without realising that their wands won't work for each other. Because a wand choose the wizard not the other way around. I am definitely sure that Archie was having the same issue in America as well. Well even there so well carefully crafted plan has some flaws lol. This plot clearly justify the fact that, no matter what these were just 11 year old kids xd. I'm still not really sure about my theory, I might be wrong. Excited to read more and find out what's going to happen next. Still enjoying this story Great work author, Kudos for your hard work and for sharing your wonderful imaginations with us. PS, I think I didn't mentioned in my previous review, I am not actually into so much of female Harry, but this one is different, it has all the adventurous and suspenseful vibes, just my kind of stuff, something new other than those usual smuty nonsense prevailing in female HP related fanfictions out there. |
| It's Areeba-Sama chapter 2 . 4/24 To be honest tho, when Harriet first interacted with that blonde girl, I really thought it was Daphne. You know that the common trait of her appearance is blonde hair, and blue eyes on top. Imagine my surprise when I discovered it was none other than Panzi. BTW, I am loving the story so far. Heard a lot about this HP fanfic, I hope it will be worthy of its reputation |
 Foster-the-Wizards chapter 12 . 3/24 Still too many words on slow plot points, but it's still a good yarn |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 9 . 3/23 Nice arm subplot |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 8 . 3/23 Coll legilimency |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 7 . 3/23 Love the hilarious look |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 6 . 3/23 Good writing, flints a bastard |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 5 . 3/23 Like the jelly brain banter |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 4 . 3/23 It's boring if the mc isn't any good at magic |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 3 . 3/23 Filler, but good stuff |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 2 . 3/23 Dangerous games and dangerous people sounds intriguing |
| Foster-the-Wizards chapter 1 . 3/23 Werid flex only being purebloods |
| LadyArtemisSilve chapter 15 . 2/20 When it changes into Hermione's pov, in the very first paragraph, the seventh line, it says Archie instead of Harry as the sixth word. This repeats in the last paragraph, seventh line (again!) and third-last word. I know it's just a mistake, but I thought I'd point it out so you can fix it. Otherwise, this fanfiction is absolutely amazing. I'm actually rereading this after quite a bit of time. I've forgotten enough details for this to still be a thrilling and mysterious read, and the first time I didn't review. This time I'm doing it properly, and I once more need to say this story is fabulous. Now I'm going to end a probably way too long review... |
| CatThroneTome chapter 7 . 2/7 "The soils separated into layers within the sample jars"..."small rocks, then a layer of sand and dirt, followed by a thin layer of minerals, then any organic matter trapped in the sample, and on the top was a layer of water, magically prevented from re-absorbing into the sand and dirt." ..that's so cool/gen, I want to join this Herbology class!/silly Though as a soil nerd I must say that the 'layer of sand and dirt' is just dirt- sand is a part of soil (particle size 0.05-2.0mm) anything bigger would be the small rocks and the smaller soil particles are silt and clay... being able to separate the minerals from the soil particles is wicked |
| me chapter 1 . 1/27 did lily go to hogwarts then? Because muggleborns were banned? Or is she a muggle in this AU? |