Reviews for A Day At The Carnival
KingKiger chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Really cute Fanfic would love to see a continuation.
TheRyuuMaster chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I'm a fan of most of kyuubi's stories, I would like to see a full book of Naruto getting there in a "last airbender" kind of way and for him to be recruited by one of the JL members and it to progress as the real tv show does. Kind of like the Naruto Rise of Red -X by 26 lord pain.
Batros940 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Very nice. A good update to a nice story.
The Red Star chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
As much as I hate to say it, cute. Teenage romance with an extraterrestrial twist. I like the idea of sequels to your oneshots. You have some really good ones.

Forever in the Sky,

The Red Star
Equinox25 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Wow this is almost as good as anythings possible show, 5 *'s :-)
Mzr90 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
That was a great one and I hope u update all your outsider stories they all good.
Phibriglex chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Couldn't help but point this out.

"twenty something teenager"

A teenager cannot be over 19 years old...or under 13.