Reviews for I'm already in hell
The Anonymous Minstrel chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
Wonderful ending suspense!

You should ignore those little green lines under sentences and check with other people to make sure that your sentences are OK. Your grammar needs fixing, to say it simply.

Good characters, Good plot. You should continue using Plotyl, he could come in useful later.
Vero Nightmare242 chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
Its great! Put up next chapter please