Reviews for A Fool In Love
mahreemari chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Diamondgigas chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
HAPPY FIC? are you ill?

LOL. Just kidding. Haha.

I like you view the story from 2 sides, like how Chelasea thinks they're dating, while Mark only wishes to. But it combines together in the end, so uits great. :D Keep it up!
SweetieLove chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Wow. Some good romance at last.

I'm happy you didn't put too much drama in your romance. It's very refreshing to see a story like this once more.

Although I really like your descriptions and your subtle comedy, I believe that you should put more depth to Mark's and Chelsea's relationship. It would make the storyline much more realistic.

You did a very good job for a first Harvest Moon oneshot. Well done.

Peace Out ~
MellowedSeeker chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Awww.. Thanks for the dedication, buddy! :DDD Awesome story. I can see improvement from the very first story you have written to this one~~! Write on! :3 I'm happy to beta for you whenever you need. _