Reviews for I'll Never Be Anybody's Hero Now
Mirage chapter 16 . 10/17
ist an interesting Story, i loved this Pairing, how it starte slowly, how his worldview chaned over he started to life the want to stay neutral to stay out of the fights...
and then his end...
of all stupid things voldemort could more or less kill of slowly his Card to immortality...

wow...what a mean stupid end for all of them...i mean voldemort only had to let Harry and Marcus swear and oat to him to Keep them from ever attacking or doing something stupid...and remus he could have given greyback for Training to accept his being, Sirius is bound to Harry so with a oat he also would stay neutral and Charlie too,...and hermione could have be a great asset for there cause clever and willing to learn and teach as she is...
very sad and stupid what voldi did...i mean he killed off two very old Familys and a third after this- without doing it himself...i think they really have not enough old power and Talent and old Magic to even spar a single being from this old Familys...stupid guy he is

someone should try a good timeturner... maybe this could be a second part Story to this...
please...i atleast like nice ending
Mirage chapter 1 . 10/16
Markus like this in ch1 is hot
narutohinatalover4ev chapter 16 . 10/11
You should make a spin off where it makes a happy ending like you wanted from the story in the beginning. Still loved the story though.
Raffylores chapter 16 . 10/5
I want to kill Voldemort now...
CynApp chapter 16 . 10/2
So dark! Normally, i dislike the dark/bittersweet fanfics but I liked it in this story. Also, it seemed so fitting to ended like this. I've read so many fanfics and most have the same plot formula. So I can gladly say that i didnt see it coming and it makes me so happy to read a good plot twist. Thanks for sharing!
Gertyfull Angel chapter 16 . 9/17
Just spent hours reading this story and i was absolutely loving it. Then i read the ending which made me sad, confused and truthfully terribly disapointed. It didnt fit with how your story was going and that there was no warning is bad. I personally hate reading sad endings i avoid storys with bad endings like the plague since the reason i like reading fanfic is so they all live happily ever after.
Mysti-n chapter 16 . 9/6
I am heartbroken with this conclusion. Loved how things were being discussed about alignments and dark versues Light and then you turn the Dark into the Light. Really aweful ending to what was going as a marvelous story. Do like your writing alot.
RyderrRalph chapter 1 . 8/11
I love your story but I have to say super sad at how it ended. Maybe even the fact that it ended.
Anonymous chapter 16 . 7/13
This turned dark pretty quick. (Pun intended)
This is a really sad story, but one hell of a good one.
Fyreheart chapter 16 . 7/1
I am totally lost by the end of Chapter 15 and the totality of Chapter 16. Harry was seeing a different side of the witches and wizards with a dark alignment. They weren’t evil. But what happened to Harry was callously evil, and it makes no sense based on the rest of the story. Children were supposed to be valued, and Harry wasn't of age yet, so was still a child.

I was sincerely enjoying a story that gave a totally different perspective into the Light and Dark camps, and gave some nuances of bonds, family traits and anchors. I didn’t find a valid reason for anything that happened after they realized Harry was a horcrux. How did Harry and Marcus disappear and die alone? Marcellus was a telepath linked to his son. He should have been able to find them. And what about when Harry and Marcus died; what happened to the horcrux and why wasn’t it mentioned?
clariangel chapter 9 . 6/21
how the fourth wall shatters at "eight chapters" also i think this must be the 97283rd time you're receiving this kind of comment I will shut up
GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 6/8
Nice twist and unusual approach, Bene Factum!
angellovesfanfiction chapter 1 . 5/17
I loved the story but the ending was horrible... I hate the ending. It is very uncomfortable to read the ending for sensitive people. You should give a warning that it has very dark ending.
Espied7 chapter 16 . 5/10
Tragic! Alternate ending?
Ventus Princeps chapter 16 . 4/13
I have to say that though the story was gripping and well written, I don't understand the ending. Really. I'm not one to want a happy ending all the time, but this was so depressing. You are a great writer but I wish I had never read this.
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