Reviews for Precious
Bluefire2000 chapter 1 . 6/29
You should make this into a story if you haven't already. It's really good.
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 1 . 3/11
I wish Charlie *had* kept Bella- I think she would have been happier growing up.
juliet709 chapter 1 . 1/31
awe i love charlie the doting father. he is such a good daddy here.
Lalina92 chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
More please this is an awesome beginning
X.summergrey.X chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I can see this happening. bella should of stayed with Charlie.
xxPrtlyCldyxx chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
This was amazing and it made me tear up. It would be one hell of multi-chapter fic. Any plans for a sequel?
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
At the beginning a sweet look at Charlie and his early fatherhood experience. Nice to see a stronger Charlie too and fight for Bella and win especially good against this Renee. Wonder how different would Bella be if stayed mostly with Charlie. And then what happens when Cullens arrive when she is just 15yo and same nearly immediate attraction.
sarah0406 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
It would be interesting to know what would have happened if Bella had lived with Charlie since the beginning.
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Holy shit.. this made me hate Renee so much.. I'm glad Charlie fought for Bella though.
may96 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
wow... I really like this story, not sure what about it, but I really like it
Jinx095 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Are you going to continue this story? I really think you should!
bookworm189 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I really love it
It would show how much Charlie and Bella bond
BELAVERA chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
If only it had happened that way! Of course Charlie might have taken het down to the Rez to let the ladies do the raising. That would have been very bad for Bella...two parents that wanted to do their own thing in spite of the child.
ScoobyPoo chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Aw, this was too sweet. I loved it.
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Poor babyElla! :-( This Renee is SUCH a bitch! :-(
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