Reviews for Bait
m8urgr8Ir8u8outof8 chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
I don't like this.. Yeah, it's well written and all...but you pass off rape as if it was a gentle breeze.. Give a warning! Except for noncon. At least make him get revenge or NOT PASS IT OFF AS A DAILY OCCURRENCE.
HelloRoxy chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
Yeah, I need a cold shower now.
don'tgivea chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
one of my favs of all time
Asylum insanity chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Pretty intense and very well written.
csiwannabe99 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
you kinda need to continue this have them take him to genkais to have his spine and hands healed and definately need to get his revenge
EverDarkDreamer chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
poor kitsune XD he took it like a good sport in the end lol quite disconcerting but likeable :) That's youko kurama for you. Nice fic! I enjoyed it. Though I don't see why it's labeled as romance hehe XD
BlAcKhEaRt2071 chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
OMG! awsome!:D :D
iwasnthere622 chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Wow! That was really very good!

I wish my writing was "rusty" like yours! :P

Great writing, great story, they were all so wonderfully in character, and it was just truly amazing!
Kalypso Fox chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Well, damn... Poor Kurama, stupid Hiei, Yusuke, and Kuwabara! The thought of Kurama covered in cum was pretty sexy though; and, the end with Hiei just running off and leaving Kurama out in the open with the others still sleeping like that. :P
Blah chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
wow, this is what I called a rape fanfic, you shouldnt dare call youself rusty when you write something like this. keep on going :)
BlueUtopiah chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
I'm pretty sure you're trying to kill me.

Just...the whole rape, then awesome fight scene, then rape part 2, then Hiei doing what he did? Choice, amazing, every awesome thing ever. You still have your mojo in this fandom, that's for sure.

So yeah, I liked it. :D
Count Napula chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Wow, a lot of older authors are writing recently. Kurama's reaction to things was quite interesting.