I check for updates CONSTANTLY on this! it's only been a year and a half since the last update! and it's so close to being done

I love this story! I'm a Snow White fan and it's been hard to find a fanfic this good! I really like it. Thank you!

If I haven't yet said how much I love this story, that has been a terrible, terrible oversight on my part. I have read the entire story through three times, and each of the last a few chapters a few more times than that. I absolutely adore this story for so many reasons. One, the plot is so well structured and intricate and fascinating to read. It's just such a great storyline. Two, your attention to worldbuilding has been phenomenal. The level of detail that you have woven throughout your story is amazing. Three, you have developed your characters so well, and for those core characters that have been there from the beginning of the show, you made them the best versions of themselves, and really had them live up to their potential in a way the show never did. I look forward to reading the conclusion of your story whenever you are able to share it with us.

Please update! I’m dying to know what happened next. If Philip will end up telling Snow and James about the kiss or if they will get interrupted again.

I love this story. You should really update it because it’s easily the best fanfic I’ve ever read!

you left it off there?

Love this story update pleassseeee.

just found this story again, any chance it will be updated anytime soon? please please pretty please?!

Has this story been abandoned? cause it's awesome!

Oh wow, I LOVED this chapter! Getting more of Belle and Adam's story was fantastic, and I can't wait to see how that continues to play out now that they are in Storybrooke. So happy to see Ella and Christopher awake now, and hoping they rush off to see Thomas now together! Such a fun story, thank you again for sharing!

I saw that coming about fourthly miles away xD. Still loved it.

That took me forever but it was so worth the read. I just read all 46 chapters in like two days and can I say wow! Your story is amazing and all though I was looking for Swanfire I’m so glad I stumbled on this beautifuly written master piece instead. Phillip/Emma is totally a ship I’ve never seen before but I can get behind it. I hope you update soon!

I really enjoyed the take on Katheryn/Abigail's story, giving her a larger role with the Showing story while also keeping her one of the good guys (I was a little worried with the previous chapter, really didn't want to see her turned evil). I also kind of loved how Abigail found Frederick at the school in the previous chapter, really great scene there! Very interesting take on the whole breaking of the curse, I always kind of enjoyed the fics where more of the people started to awaken even before Emma was able to officially break the curse - just adds such an interesting dynamic, especially when Emma so steadfastly refuses to believe (though now I'm super curious as to how this story will continue now that she does seem to be on board). Thank you again for creating/sharing such a fun story!

Hope you update soon! I love the story.

Wow, I'm really loving the Thomas/James relationship, they have such a great dynamic and really work well together as the two princes who are awake. Hard scene for Emma and Snow, and continuing to hope nothing too terrible has happened to Michael Tillman (or his kids once they reach the town line). There is so much great cat-and-mouse going on here between the baddies and those starting to wake from the curse, can't wait to see how this continues to play out and how it will impact the breaking of the curse! Thank you again for creating/sharing!