Reviews for Try to Seduce Me
magicofantasy chapter 1 . 1/8
Wow just wow
LW12 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
great story
Dark Kitty Mate chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
lol at the end. Oh my God!
satomika chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
LOL

kya!

all i want is more! :D
PureBlossoms14 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
i loved it!
DASvicks63 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Really nice good job
dick 'n' pussy chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Pls pls pls pls pls rite a contiuation if this story
noname00 chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Nice fic
Brennason chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I loved this! I was laughing so hard when Hinata put her hand on Naruto's leg and he freaked out.
dbtiger63 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Good job! Liked the idea, the execution and the emotions that came through. Well done and forces me to check out your other stories.

Thanks

DB
JenaMiyu chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Although i am not one to read oneshots, i must say that this one really caught my interest. It was definitely an 'out of character' experience for both Naruto and Hinata, but i enjoyed the beauty if that very much :) great work!
Random Guy who Reads chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
I liked the story, I think you captured Hinata's insecurity pretty well, although the topic itself and explanation/idea behind the plot was slightly awkward, and made me feel slightly distanced at first. A more 'human' idea may be something that would've helped, whereas a seduction course is just so far out of normal society rules for the majority of us reading.
ShyGamerGirl chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Good, very good u should totaly continue it. Not much of a lemon, more of a lime .
daniel 29 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This seems like one of the funniest lemon stories I've ever read
nonjames chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
This can go on longer not bad of a lime I will fav you
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