Reviews for Fragmentary Blue
Dragonlord1199 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Poor poor Misa
Senile-felineS chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
That was really great. It's pretty similar to my one deathnote fanfic although i can't do slow building introspection like this, that's a skill.
everyday-deeds chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
This was beautifully written. I loved that she's looking for Light in everything, and I think you captured her mindset about Kira perfectly- that sort of fevered devotion because there's nothing else to hold onto. Misa has so much depth here, and I found it heartbreaking when she talked about trying to see Light in the shinigami's eyes. Fantastic work.
Ink Reservoir chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Ah, hollowness.

You captured Misa's character perfectly.
Adala chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
This was very sad and touching. I did enjoy it.

I think "now that she can here the silence" is supposed to be "now that she can hear the silence".

I was a bit surprised that you made Matsuda an alcoholic. But in the time that apparently has passed, a lot of things can happen.

Cheers!
Adala
Pensulliwen chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Great fic. Repetitive at points, but I think it was supposed to be. I can't think of much constructive criticism at the moment, just *sobs forever*
aiushtha chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
That was very poignant. I felt really bad for Misa. :(
plannedbyReaperLight chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Aw, very nice and very sad. I feel bad for both of them.
Sashocirrione chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Thank you. It's very introspective and very in-character for Misa.