Reviews for Only One Power Can Stand Alone
Pinemartin chapter 2 . 1/15/2013
Great story with plenty of details. I also have a couple of questions, Is the Federation's armed forces completely unified? Since the Federation was "a group of loosely allied Democracies". Also In the first VC game, they named four Federation Armies with there respective corps, (2 Frank-Vichy, 1 Rhineland, 1 Languedoc). And was wondering are the names for these armies from there respective federation member countries? But Keep on writing!
NatOreN chapter 2 . 12/7/2011
It's a lot better than before, I can tell you that. The dialogue is much easier on the eyes and mind but I think you switch between past and present too much. Now, I'm not entirely sure what others think or what could be considered norm, but I'm of the opinion you should stick fully to either past or present and not switch it around, except maybe in occasional sentences if it works.