Reviews for Becareful What You Wish For
Gerda Willows chapter 1 . 8/26
Not the puppy eyes! Nooo!


Hi. So, I think the plot is interesting — your character isn't a rabid fangirl and she doesn't hate Twilght either, she's a nice balance.
Your grammar isn't terrible and you I didn't notice any misspelled words, which is a plus in my opinion. Good story — you shouldn't abandon this, it would be a shame if you did.
anthea tronchard step chapter 15 . 5/25
I think Jacob can screw with her just twice - when he receives the wedding invitation and with him imprinting on Renesmee -you can add isa too so he can really choose and then isa can die her death on the ice and Jacob can realize he chooses her not Bella or Renesmee and the story can be in her original world.
inuyashademons14 chapter 15 . 12/16/2016
I really like this story !
FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 15 . 2/10/2016
This story is absolutely fantastic. Please, please, please update!
RosaSilvermist chapter 15 . 8/30/2015
Update soon!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/12/2015
this is literally my favorite fanfiction in the world i'm so so so happy when i read it
Fire Dolphin chapter 15 . 6/2/2015
I enjoy reading more about Isa's interactions with the Cullen's and the siblings bond she is starting to have with Edward. I do wish that she had not given I. To Jacob so quickly, n had made him suffer for all the heartache. I look forward to the next chapter.
fanficaddict chapter 15 . 5/14/2015
Fell in love with this story! This is amazing, keep it up.
ProditorMagnus chapter 15 . 4/12/2015
Story has got better with last few chapters.
ProditorMagnus chapter 10 . 4/12/2015
Too much angst so far imo.
A Week Of Sundays chapter 15 . 4/9/2015
RavensLoch chapter 15 . 4/8/2015
*grins* Actually what she was doing is allowed. I believe if he's a minor. Under the law I believe it's called Romeo and Juilet Love it allows minors and of age adults to date, and be engaged, but! They have to had known each other(I think be friends but I forget) before she became a Of-age adult.
So bam, sue me if you can't take my awesome level on law-knowledge. :)
RavensLoch chapter 11 . 4/8/2015
I swear if you make her go back I'll freaky leave a hate comment.
RavensLoch chapter 7 . 4/7/2015
Why would I want to hate Jacob? No, why'd you try? I couldn't hate him if I wanted to XD I'm sorry I'm extremely hard to convince on things.
ARoseofAmber chapter 14 . 2/20/2015
I will be honest when I say I almost skipped over this story because of the "falling into the books" cliche but I am so glad that I didn't! I love how you have weaved Isa into the story it hour changing a lot of things. To often I end up quitting on a story because within the first two chapters the OC is imprinted on by Jacob and everything about the story changes except for the bare minimum to keep the story flowing like the books. Your characters have personality, something that seems to be lacking in most fanfiction. The twist that Jacob was imprinted on instead of doing the imprinting is brilliant. I really hope you get the creative juices flowing and keep the story going!
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