|Reviews for Time|
| Rabbitleap chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
I'm crying at this point! This was heart breaking, in a good way T-T
| Deborahpflover chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Crying now. So hard. Gosh he dies and he's smiling because he can only feel her lips and I just broke down. Amazing job! :')
| Israali Kotetsu chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
I... I... I'M NOT CRYING! D'':
| Lady Ri of Cherith chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
wah you actually made me cry! How did you do that? Nothing does that... ;_;
You are now one of my favorite authors 3
| starryflames chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
WOW I FEEL SAD ABOUT THIS :''(
| passion00 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I am new here, so I don't know how this works here entirely... ;
But I really liked this one. I love tragic and dramatic stories so much...
(plus I love the pairing...)
I think it is really difficult to write a death fic but you did a great job in my opinion. I especially like how this is so... silent (no talking, just thoughts)
It makes such a sad atmosphere.
| LordVanity chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
This inspired me to write a death fic O_O
it was really good for a death, anyways
| Hana-Chan00 chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
God, this was depressing...on to find a less gloomy fic of yours!
| pinklover101 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
First you've written, first i've read. And I love it. It's so short and simple, and just gorgeous. It tugs at the bottom of my stomach (in a good but sad way) and it kind of makes me want to cry. Out o happiness and sadness. Great job. _
| IvaMilk chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
His thoughts had slipped away but he felt the sensation on his lips. Her lips.
His heart slowed to a stop but his mouth tugged up in a slight smile. He never would have had enough time.
and then i ended with a tushue ;(( ur such a great author! i know its little bit of annoying but i cant stop writing comments of how good u are! And u can touch my soul with even 1 sentence: to make me cry, to make me lough!
ur the greatest just write more please! its killing me slowlyyy!
| ToReachYou chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Okay, well... This was really well written, and the details were perfect, and oh, might I add it was so FUCKING DEPRESSING. But really, I wonder if Natsu will ever die. . Damn I hope not. Not Lucy either- yeah I'm gonna stop scaring myself. Keep up the good work! :D
| ReianaA chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
| Unicorn-in-Training chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Omigawd thats just so sad!TTTT *cries*
Nice fic you did well for a death fic*clapclapclap*
Good job :D
| GoldenRoseTanya chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
it was sniff*sniff* so nostalgic
| IAMNOTAHAM chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Oh I love it!