|Reviews for The Trip Home 2|
| izziey chapter 14 . 4/1/2012
dun dun DUN! bella's lawyer side gonna come out and protect jasper?
| Jessypt chapter 17 . 4/1/2012
::huge grins:: Like you, I could want more and more and more of these three, but you're right. THis was a great place to end!
So excited for you and bringing this to conclusion.
Thanks for sharing, bb!
| CassandraLowery chapter 17 . 4/1/2012
Awwwww. I hate to see these characters go almost as much as you do, my dear. You've written some amazing characters here, surrounded by a love so deep and pure that it's almost holy. It's not perfect-no love is perfect-but it WORKS, day in and day out, deepening with the addition of each year, each child, each new venture and experience. You should be very proud of what you've accomplished, my dear-I know I am.
Thus saith the English professor. :P
Looking very much forward to your future and side and outtakes! Have a wonderful week, and please and always, keep the faith and keep writing!
| mspacman1 chapter 17 . 4/1/2012
of course this makes me sad, but i totally get what you mean and understand it! It is a good place to stop their story there, but please know how much I will miss them and I will think of this incredible story often! Loved every minute of it!
| izziey chapter 9 . 4/1/2012
maybe some of the fans that speculate soooo much about rob/kristen/jackson/peter should read this chapter.
| izziey chapter 5 . 4/1/2012
thank you for posting such a realistic portrait of new parenthood!
| sessahhh chapter 5 . 4/1/2012
This chapter was, to me, what having a child would be like - the difficulty, scheduling, not feeling beautiful anymore, not having time, and feeling disconnected when you make the time to do something special. Thanks for keeping it real (lol). As always, your writing is wonderful. I hope you don't think otherwise because I've failed to mention it as often as I should have but I really have missed reading things for the sake of reading a good story, a great plot, interesting character progression, etc. With your stories, I can focus on the good stuff and not annoying mistakes. You always take the time to perfect each chapter. It gives me a happy so thank you.
| sessahhh chapter 4 . 4/1/2012
I like that you had the entire pregnancy and birth in one chapter. It was quick but had a thoughtful, steady pace. Nothing felt rushed. And the name was wonderful - Emma Jane. Very cute. I love how each of them is constantly offering their special version of expertise - like love, affection, or just some much-needed encouragement.
| sessahhh chapter 3 . 4/1/2012
:D :D :D Yay! All the happy feelings for this trio. I loved how realistic you made the process. The fact that it took several months and how your Bella went through all the emotions with each month that progressed. It was fabulous as usual. I like how she told everyone. Very sweet.
Loved this line in particular: "You tart! You know what I mean. Two pairs of boxers on the floor. Every single toilet seat left up…" hehehe
| sessahhh chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
Ah yes, I remember why I love this story - it creates the perfect storm for wanting to pounce on the hubs when I read on the weekend. Unfortunately, he's not here at the moment. On well, guess I'll just have to take care of things myself. *ahem* TMI? Meh, you'r probably used to it.
That last but at the end sort of hit close to home. It's sad when you've been trying to get preggo and you get the feeling it's gonna be it, only to get that single negative line when you pee on the stick. :/
| izziey chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
so happy to see these three again. this was my introduction to poly and now that i have many poly friends, i am so grateful that i had some background.
| sessahhh chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Yay! I finally had some I've to read your lovely sequel. I forgot how utterly amazing you are at just tossing in the sex between three people - like it's some easy feat. Love these characters and the fact that the first chapter is five years later and takes us back to their honeymoon in Greece. Yuuuum.
| Lurecyka chapter 17 . 4/1/2012
I'm in shock that this story is ending...I love those guys so much and it is such a real pleasure to read; I can understand, but still...
Thanks so much for sharing this with us...I love you bb:)
| Kim Ginsberg chapter 17 . 4/1/2012
awwwwwwwwwwwww dont end it!
| erika shoval chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
Great job! Can't wait for the next episode.
Your story is original. I love how you write.