|Reviews for Burn|
| Manda chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Wow, you're a damn good writer! I enjoyed reading this :)
| Wolfasaurus chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
You did a great job with this! I think you captured dany and jorah perfectly! This is how it should have gone and this is exactly why I love reading well written fanfics like yours! Cheers :)
| Alessa chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
VERY WELL WRITTEN! Bravo! :)
| Jackie1776 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I thought that it was really cool that you used a extract from the book ... But isn't that copyright?
| DeathByMonkees chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
That was wonderful. The smut was great, and I like that your writing isn't modern, it had that great "fantasy" feel that really gets one thrust into the medieval world of the story. Great job!
| parisdamour chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
oh, the sweetness...how i love those two!
| KoteDiM chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Absolutely amazing fanfic. The best Game Of Thrones fic I've read at all - without doubt. I'm so glad to have you on "the Dany x Jorah team". There really aren't enough of us.
Instant fave and thumbs up from Denmark
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Aw, so he really kissed her in the books :)
How she wants to tell him that she doesnt feel the same for him but cant really do it because shes looking at him like that.
"On the other hand, it made her regret all the more keenly that she did not love him as he loved her. As he deserved to be loved."
Ah, okay..? So she doesnt feel the same for him... :( Okay, then I can understand it that she doesnt want him to believe that, that would only hurt him.
I can imagine him to be like..Tyrion about his looks. He knows that many dont like it but he cant do much against it. I mean, I can understand that Dany feels ashamed about her thoughts.. But she really changed so much!
"She was queen now. She could think whatever she liked about whom she liked, even if it was that her sworn knight was not desirable to her."
Shes so sure of herself now, I really like that. :)
But how bold Jorah is, too! Wow!
"Drogo's face and form had pleased her before she had been certain of his love-and he had never uttered his words, as Jorah had done."
Yeah, thats true. And I really like it that she thinks of .. possible feelings she could have for Jorah. :)
"If this scheme of yours for going to Astapor is as successful as your attempt at seducing me, I may accept your hand."
haha, yeah, she really changed much. ;)
| AngelofSnow chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
I love that you choose this scene to change as I felt that Dany very much wanted to give in to Jorah's advances but stopped herself. I love imagining that she hadn't stopped herself.
And did such an excellent job of showing her waver, not sure whether to give into her desires.
| Neminis chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
How come that this has no reviews? It certainly deserves more than just my meager one! It is sweet, it's hot and it continues the original quote very well in a way that makes the break between the original and your writing near invisible. A good job )