Reviews for Slow Burn
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
*gigglesnort!* Who says readin' fan fic isn't educational LOL! I will keep this tip in mind, thanks!
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
...LOVED IT! It was sweet yet oh sooooooooo kinky as furking hell! XD seriously I'm in love with this! This is how all fics should be! XD genius I say! Genius!
MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Very nicely done. Interesting seeing Edward behave like a bit of a brat, lol. That ginger was just what he needed. ;) But your portrayal of their relationship felt very honest. Thanks for sharing this.
mrsbeas chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
This was great! I really enjoyed the characters, especially take-charge Carlisle!
sessahhh chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I think I loved this o/s waaaay more than I should have. It was delicious in its evil kinkiness. Great job with this prompt.
mw138 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
That was great! :D
Liliom99 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I really loved it! the characters are so lovable. Cocky, bratty, charming, angst-free Edward and poised, smart, beautiful, kinky, brit Carlisle, are one of the best matches I read so far. The plot is original and different, especially for an E/C pairing. What's not to love in your story? the situation of their encounter and first date, the evolution of their relationship, the dynamic they built, and the end, all very well written, make this fic a gem.

Thanks for sharing! Lil
Peaches Skywalker chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
please tell me you're going to continue this !

i adore them both and i think they have potential to become something big ! they're totally loveable !
Beautiful Figment chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
I'll admit to being wary of this prompt because I knew virtually nothing about the kink (and as a result, not being too keen on the idea after a traumatic google search...sometimes, google ain't my friend...). I decided to read anyway, because I do love me some Carlward.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Edward and Carlisle played so well off each other, the dialogue was seamless and their flirting was so charming and funny. Edward's bratty "charm" was adorable (the "Masentron" remark, and the "You talk purty" line in the email had me snorting out loud) and Carlisle was his usual dashing self...even more dashing as a Brit! (OMG YUM)

And what a scorching, gingery lemon! And then the bath...I melted. So sweet.

A lot of folks ask for a continuation of a oneshot. While this is perfect as a oneshot with well developed characters and plot, I would LOVE to see this story explored as a multiple-chapter, culminating just as it has (or beyond, because I'm greedy like that ;) ). That is, if you're in a taking requests frame of mind. *whistles innocently*

Thanks for sharing!
FinnMac chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
I'm sure everyone who reviews this story will go on about the smut, but I want to tell you how well I think this was written. Really nice language and pacing. A very sweet Carlisle and endearing Edward. I'm not into slash and read this more curious about the figging (huh? what? why? whatever!). But I'm glad I was introduced to your work. Thank you very much.
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This was soooo good, sexy and fun at the same time. I loved the characters you created.
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
oh Edward's such a cheeky bugger!
aStubbornRose chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
So hot and so fun!
mssdare chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Ahh bb, I loved this story! It was really funny at the beggining, then ALL THE FREAKING HOTTNESS, and the sweet sweet, oh - so sweet end with love words and a hint of spicy ginger in the air :)




I loved the note C. sent to E.! And all their interactions. And the punishment? :) Well - he surely deserved it! :)
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
I wasn't sure what to expect from this prompt, but hello- you had me at CarlWard. I absolutely loved this piece. Sassy- but all male- Edward, calm and leery Carlisle...SPANKING! Be still my heart! I would love to see more of these two!
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