Reviews for Proper Elocution
camain chapter 7 . 9/18/2012
boring
Blackcurrant Bonbons chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
I loved this fic, Bertie/Lionel fics are always so rare, and if they are written they're mostly coals, but yours are like lovely gems, a real treat to read! I loved the build up of their relationship here, the ambiguity was wonderful, and the last sentence could have so many potential endings, it's nerve wrangling! As well, the jigsawed montage of flash forwards and glimpses of different points of view was beautifully written and tear jerking! I especially enjoyed the scene where Lionel pressed Bertie's jaw, the UST is at toxic levels! And I know this seemed the natural place to end, but I would LOVE for you to continue this, I NEED you to continue this! Do you have any plans to? Once again, a lovely fic. Grosse bise, Shona X