|Reviews for The Courtship Of Bastila Shan|
| WriterManfromJCF chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
The tension builds...
Just...wow! Very great stuff.
These chapters are doing what they should, which is building the tension. I love it. And if the ending of this chapter is inferring what I think it is, I'm going to love the next chapter.
| WriterManfromJCF chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
You've still got me!
One question: Wasn't HK still destroyed at the end of the last chapter? I guess he could've been rebuilt. That kinda stuck out to me.
| WriterManfromJCF chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
There were a few sentences I would've wrote differently, but overall it was very great. There were issues (there was an i instead of an I) but you conveyed everything in such a fantastic manner that I was stunned. Quite frankly, this story is gripping me, which is not something I can necessarily say about the Revan novel, where I literally started skipping the Scourge chapters.
I love that you included Nomi and Vima, and I love that you made the council know about their passion! That made my day!
Truthfully, I think this will go better than the Revan novel. I hope I'm right!
| WriterManfromJCF chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
Boring? Maybe it's because I'm a fan, but I say: no, it's not. Very interesting on emotional levels, which is what I expected from the title.
All my compliments transcend from the last chapter. You've really got me.
But I don't think you proof-read it as well.
"Insider her" I know that means inside of her, but it really made me stop for a second.
Also, it says "giving her a p" and then stops. I know it was most likely the formatting that did that, but I'd really like to know what that sentence said.
As I've said, stellar work! I'm continuing on from here.
| WriterManfromJCF chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Very nice. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Some parts I loved, and some I really liked. There are flaws, but it's still a well-written first chapter with emotions that work. Personally, what I like the most is how you stayed true to character. These words really are what Bastila and Revan would say.
Stellar job, thus far. I hope it continues.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/9/2012
This is just adorable and sweet and... yeah it's amazing.
| memmek10k chapter 15 . 7/8/2012
Great story you have here :)
| JourneyRocks13 chapter 15 . 7/8/2012
Damn, haha Bastila and Revan dont work slow at all! haha
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 15 . 7/8/2012
| Jocasta Silver chapter 14 . 7/8/2012
Wow! Wonder if they're going to tell the Jedi Council about that.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/8/2012
| JourneyRocks13 chapter 14 . 7/8/2012
Great chapter, I think Revan will need to explain what happened to Bastila, and it might come in the epilogue
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 14 . 7/8/2012
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/8/2012
Love this stoty !
| memmek10k chapter 13 . 7/7/2012
great story so far