Reviews for Senses chapter 10 . 4/30/2012
LalalaSpacingInPandaLand chapter 9 . 3/12/2012
Please write more you are amazing! chapter 9 . 3/11/2012
hahahahahaha i loveeeee Pansy so much. favorite character. lol.
Rogue Blade chapter 9 . 3/7/2012
Update please!
Rogue Blade chapter 8 . 2/27/2012
Please update soon.
amateurwrit chapter 7 . 2/19/2012
amateurwrit chapter 6 . 2/18/2012
Okay, this is seriously wonderful. I can't wait to read more!
littleredkels chapter 6 . 2/11/2012
I'm so dreadfully (wonderfully) addicted to this story. More updates I say!
amaunole chapter 4 . 1/26/2012

Your story is wonderful! I love the idea. I'm on chapter 4 of it now and I just couldn't wait any longer to make a suggestion. Have you considered getting a Beta to read over your story? The idea is wonderful and I hope I'm not being offensive. I think the story would be amazing if only some of the grammar mistakes were smoothed out and some of the paragraphs clarified. For example, these sentences, "He had to ask his father about him, so after he had gotten back from the dungeons he had sat at his desk in his room. Trying to make it decent enough and giving his father no hint at mentioning any of the previous letters he gave to Esclaves to send it out." They are very unclear. I have never been a Beta so I'm not sure what all is expected of one, but I'm sure they could help you make your story extraordinary. I would even be willing to help if you'd like.

Again, I meant no offense. I really do love your story and can't wait to finish it!
Melikalilly chapter 4 . 1/13/2012
i like this story
littleredkels chapter 4 . 1/9/2012
I am very interested to know where all of this is going! Excited for the next update!
kyatariina chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
great chap would love more Harry/Draco moments... update soon!
Razzledazzy chapter 3 . 12/23/2011
Interestttttttttttting. :O I want to know moreeeeeee.
jujukittychick chapter 3 . 12/22/2011
very interesting start so far, i'm curious to see how draco and harry manage to work things out between themselves. a few spelling issues throughout, nothing too major, but you may want to read through the chapters again to find the odd parts. keep up the good work
jujukittychick chapter 2 . 12/22/2011
couple of minor spelling issues, but this one you might want to fix ""I think your corruption is needed for this."" lol think you meant cooperation, but corruption is actually kinda funny
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