Reviews for Beautiful
jk chapter 8 . 5/30
See what I meant with chapter 8? They use it just to be whores...Edward has his sub...but fucks all of jaspers subs...and lets him fuck sure he also has scenes with anyone else that he likes on a fucking whim...their just used up whores...
and you know what this means right? jaspers sub is alice...and what does Edward do when jasper gets a new sub? he fucks them ! so not only does he like to watch Carlisle get it on...but he watches jasper too...AND he fucked alice...
this version of Edward has fucked his way through the cast of twilight, hes used the fuck up and I don't understand how anyone could find him attractive after that.
jk chapter 7 . 5/30
wow, chapter 7 was fucking awkward...Edward is soooo fucking gay!
jk chapter 6 . 5/30
chapter 6 was stupid as fuck...bella didn't even do anything disrespectful and Edward freaks out? and hes sooo disappointed...LOL What did he expect when he had agreed? hes supposed to be the submissive...he agreed but he wasn't submissive AT ALL...its like you made drama out of pulled it right out of thin air. Edward get mad over doesn't make any sense to me, so bella crying in her room like a fucking bitch doesn't make and sense either.
jk chapter 5 . 5/30
well that was very predictable...its seems like bella is way too easy. Her dialogue is very predictable. Until the end of the chapter at least, then its just ridiculous. Shes only been with her dom for what? two days and already she wants to be "the master" its stupid really, and you keep telling us how inexperienced she is yet you have her asking for that?
And that shit about him being the only man that ever stupid. Are you saying that's why shes so easy? because she wants ANY male attention she can get? Does bella have daddy issues? low self esteem?
Are you implying that subs are only subs because they have these issues?
jk chapter 4 . 5/30
this is really repetitious...oh your so wet and ready...your mine...I need you now...its like the same shit over and over.
lkl chapter 2 . 5/30
whats the point of being a 24 hour sub and being monogamous if hes just gonna sleep with other people anyway...? and same sex? are you telling me that Edward is gay? He fucks men?
and him having her be with other people and taping it? That's really old fat guy at his computer creepy.
yaaaa I don't think I care for your version of domward.
jk chapter 1 . 5/30
you know what I don't get about bdsm? Is why people use it as a excuse to be whores. It seems that they have sex with anything their attracted to, if everyone did that the whole population would have an std.
banshee69 chapter 9 . 4/29
Edward is a man that knows what he wants and he gets it. lol.

banshee69 chapter 8 . 4/29
Jasper didn't do anything out of their norm, but I really disliked him. Loved that Edward made everything up to Bella.

banshee69 chapter 7 . 4/29
Holy hell...
banshee69 chapter 6 . 4/29
Amazing chapter.

banshee69 chapter 5 . 4/29
Oh, yes. Bella needs to be in control.

banshee69 chapter 4 . 4/27
*fans self*

biblepam chapter 2 . 4/25
just found your story and giving it a read... Laughed when I was reading the section where Edward was going over the list.. No to menstrual sex?... I saw a posting once... Guy: "so, sex tonight babe?" Girl: " I told you! I have my period." Guy: "What's the point in having a sword if you don't get it bloody."... ...
banshee69 chapter 3 . 4/25
Amazing. Beautifully written.

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