Reviews for The Promise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() more updates please loving it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again - oh my goshness James and Lenya are so damn cute. But argh, the promise...noo Lenya, fiiight it. Tash. Write the next chapter. Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh, Dimitri and Rose are so damn cute together ;-; seriously. Having both Dimitei and Tasha's POVs right next to each other was done really well, since they hate each othe. Well Tasha doesn't hate him (kinda) but you know what I mean. I also need to mention my like for Ivan and Lenya's family feud. X3 and Lenya x James ftwww. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lenya, Nousky and Chris have such awesome teamwork. I love the way you write combat, it's all very fluid and it seems natural. I wish I could so thay x3 And then the letters comes with what the title is kn about. Dun dun dun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re-reading your story ftw. I don't know if I ever told you that I really like Lenya's character. She is such an awesome bad-ass. Woot. And the cliffhanger you put here was really nicely done. I would have kiiiilled if I didn't already know the next chapter is up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only one question at this point wouldn't Christian be the King if Lissa is Queen? Prince would be their son. And that little interaction with James was interesting something to think about using later in the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey in the sencond section first sentence isnt it supposed to be she tells chris not James bc James is the jerk. :s |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhh this is so good! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep going it is getting really good! i love your plot! keep updating, and soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cumpulsion... how come only ivan and christian have figured out who lenya's mother was... anyhow great story cant wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() U need 2 write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, I CAN'T wait till the ball! I hope it's juicy! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This might sound total dense, but i thought there were more than 6 chapters already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far:) |