|Reviews for Proud: Fictionista Witfit Prompts Winter 2011:2012|
| MissWM chapter 67 . 8/19/2021
This was truly amazing. I get a bit antsy when there are married people envolved. But it all made sense. I loved the story. You are a very talented story teller. Thansk for sharing
| MissWM chapter 48 . 8/19/2021
So, i went from chapter 48 do chapter 68 (don't know how i did it) and totally thought you did an outtake and had not finished the story. i blame my sleepy eyes. and the fact that i was reading on my phone. they have this "last" option.i think i clicked there instead of next. hahaahah so so sorry. going to finish it. for sure.
| MissWM chapter 68 . 8/19/2021
Omg. I cannot believe this is not finished. So good. I was really enjoying. Maddie is a sweetheart. Thanks for sharing
| Vampyre chapter 32 . 4/21/2021
Tuition? For the next 5 years? I really like this Bella.
| prachi310884 chapter 1 . 1/18/2021
I truly love this story
| Nataly29 chapter 68 . 8/4/2020
What a beautiful, sweet and inspiring story! I loved it, thank you so much for sharing it with us! :D
| debba8 chapter 68 . 5/15/2020
This is a great story!
| narsuess chapter 67 . 5/10/2020
I've finished this fic in less than a day, I couldn't seem to put it down, it's a very interesting story to read and I just had to know what will happen to Edward and Bella and Maddie.
Edward's struggle as single parent was real and I just couldn't help but feel sympathy and emotional here and there, but at the end his love and devotion was paid off.
very lovely story, thanks for sharing
| jane-with-a-y chapter 66 . 6/20/2019
I've really enjoyed this story; thank you so much for your creativity and way with words. I wasn't sure about this one at first - I don't particularly like stories where the characters are still married. But you handled this with grace and love.
My two-year old grandson is named Edward. We call him Teddy!
| Mia chapter 68 . 3/4/2019
Loved the book. Read it in one go. Thank you! :)
| Hazeleyes59 chapter 68 . 11/20/2018
I've just read this story for the 3rd or 4th time and it's just as good as the first time. Thank you for writing this Edward.
| S1203 chapter 68 . 10/16/2018
You make my day, last two days with that great story! Apslouttly beautiful read. Thank you!
| soccermom101113 chapter 67 . 8/27/2018
Omg the ending has me crying. Great story. Thanks for sharing
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/10/2018
He is walking a thin line...i respected him more when he said he wouldnt mess with a married woman...here he is doing it...that makes him a bad father
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/10/2018
Eh...edward is kinda stupid.