Reviews for Que Sera, Sera
keelhaulrose chapter 6 . 12/12/2011
Sorry I haven't had a chance to review- two sick kids and I haven't had a chance to sit and read.

I like where this is going, but I don't like Ron. He's being a bit passive, isn't he? Waiting for her to say the 'd' word makes it all his idea, and he's probably go telling his mum that later.

Good job. Looking forward to more.
mattsloved1 chapter 6 . 12/12/2011
My chuckling at the computer had my husband telling me it was definitely my bedtime. lol

I love their letters back and forth, 'Bilbo' the house-elf, Hermione looking like a French maid, as well as Severus' 'stirrings are just a few things I like in this chapter. :) I also like how he notices, and appreciates, how Hermione respected his space.

Very nice, thanks! To bed for me.
heartmom88 chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
*Evil* cliffhanger! But I'm glad the git softened a little. He never could resist an academic challenge...

Anxiously awaiting more!

hm88
muppetpowelly7 chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
wow this is brilliant keep it up. please update :D xxx
mattsloved1 chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
Very nice chapter. I love their back and forth letters. You've truly gotten Severus' biting wit down. I am interested to find out what's going on with Hermione's magic problem. And of course your final line achieved what you had hoped. I desperately want to read more!

Thanks again! :D
Lunajen323 chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
Loving this story...rather interesting turn of events.
JeniDRalph chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
I loved all the letters... snarkiness abounds! He has a theory... cliffie. I can't wait for the next chapter.
popevenus chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
This is excellent work. I've read all the chapters and they flowed naturally and beautifully. Keep them coming.
middlekertz chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
Uh oh. Yay!
Person Of A Strange Origin chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
He just can't resist a challenge (giggles). This is very good. I love the banter between Hermione and Severus! It's so cute and maddening! :D
MK08 chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
I like where this is going! Very interesting indeed! Can't wait for more!
notwritten chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
Good chapter. Keep smiling. :-)
severus49 chapter 4 . 12/11/2011
Absolutely fantastic story all except for this one line: You didn't leave me must choice, what with breaking down my door and everything." Problem is, it doesn't sound like something a grown man would say, let alone Snape. If you changed it to "You didn't leave me much choice, Mrs. Weasley. If I would not have admitted you, I would have found my door hexed to splinters." or something along those lines. I love the story - and I have to admit, I'm just like Hermione when someone bullies my daughters: I am on the warpath in nanoseconds! I hope Rose gets her head on straight - no Malfoy's worth it anyway.
renaid chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
It seems to me Ron wants Hermione to suggest divorce so he can blame her when it happens. He gives the appearance of wanting to be out without having to take responsibility for it. That's what he's hinting around for.

And how pathetic "I think about the kids sometimes, too." Does Hermione really not see what a horrible father and husband he has been? He's the one who basically moved out and she basically left him.

This taking no responsibility to save the marriage because "I just don't feel enough" is a load of crap. Marriage takes work and if you stop trying it will die. Dude. Put me and Ron in a back alley and I'll have some words. Throw Hermione back there, too. They both need some whooping on.

I know, this is an HGSS story so we want her with Severus eventually but this half-assed attitude toward marriage is really steaming me! Sorry, long and stressful week has revealed itself in my passionate review...
MetamorphmagusLupin chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
Ooh... I'm sure he does. He's a clever fellow. I look forward to your update.
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