|Reviews for The making of a King|
| yay chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
This starts out depressing and gets worse, but in a good way. Thanks for writing!
| Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Gorgeous and poignant. All I can say is please write more Merlin fic!
| Soului chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Telling Arthur's story like this in little blurbs was definitely interesting and you did it in a truly unique and entertaining way. I kind of like how some were longer than others, you used that to keep the flow of the story going very well. I also found that there were a few lines in here that I absolutely loved.
"In the future there will be times when the only reason Arthur did the right thing was because of Merlin's unshakable faith that he would."
"She loved Arthur longer but she loved Lancelot more."
There was something about these lines that really reached out to me.
Thank you for this.
| z67 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
This was refreshing and original. The beat of the paragraphs was intriguing and the little glimpses you wrote in non-chronological order was really interesting, it maintained the story's dynamic to the end.
Although I hoped you would have added a Merlin-scene near the end, before the battle with Mordred. But that's just me. :)
Loved this. Keep it coming.