Reviews for Dire Consequences
Cat chapter 28 . 5/12/2013
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Hundius chapter 28 . 3/12/2013
Hi, this is one of the best stories I've read so far.
The way that you tell the story each time from other person's view makes it interesting.

Back to the story.
If Mike hadn't pulled his nose in the case, then both were still together. But it's her own fault also. If she had told him, then he would have kept distance.
MissShawnaAlice chapter 28 . 7/18/2012
I have loved every minute of reading this, and became so engrossed in what I was reading that I missed my stop on the train! Defintely worth it though.
Excellent writing! I love it.
Keep up the good work
MissShawnaAlice (Nell)
wickeduk chapter 28 . 5/12/2012
This is the third fic of yours I've managed to read in the last few days. I've just read this one from start to finish - I was totally mesmerized and I couldn't stop reading. I was reading on my phone while traveling and between exams today, and then came home to finish it. It was awesome work. The ending was bittersweet, but it was the way it needed to be. Excellent work!
Artemisbeloved chapter 28 . 4/16/2012
good and well written sory i just dont like it when my heroes get screw over by there oh good intentions. I like happy endings and this didn't give me that satisfaction. Butt still well worth the read
littlemiss11 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Hi, I just wanted 2 say how much I loved this story and it was very good. I wil be reading your next stories that are 2 come!

I may not be able 2 review exacly as I'm movin 2 australia maybe ill meet them! It was fantastic I'm glad you never continued as it was good the way you finished!

Fairwinds mr mrs moholland!

S.H xxx
MrAndMrsMulholland chapter 28 . 1/6/2012
Thanks for the reviews. I loved to read them every day.

alimoo... in my head the story continues. I had the story of Kate coming home after seeing Mike in the shopping center stuck in my head for days.

I had to restrain myself from trying to find out what the sex of the second baby is going to be because I'd sure want to know how she's doing, but the story of Kate McGregor is finished and the story I would have to write down is of Stephanie Callaghan (cheeky Mike for finding it out after all ;D) It would be a spin off from Sea Patrol and that's not something I would want to write.

The main reason why I wanted to write these last two chapters was to show you that life goes on... even for Mike and Kate. It was so sad when Kate died and at that time it felt like Mike would never get his act together again, but 5 years later he's in love and ready to get married. Kate has found a reason to keep on living and is happily married to Alex and is a mother to Michael and soon someone else (grrr now I DO want to know who that second baby is...)

Well, at least I wanted to end on a happier note than 'sorry guys Kate is dead, story is finished', but Mike and Kate back together was never my plan. Some actions have dire consequences...

Hopefully a new fanfic will flow out of my fingers shortly. Hopefully I'll see you all then.

ALIMOO1971 chapter 28 . 1/6/2012
Great chapter and story. Dam i thought that they might get back together, oh well keep up the good work
littlemiss11 chapter 28 . 1/6/2012
That was sooo nice all most made me cry!

Its sad that you are no doing it anymore. But oh well.

Ill keep in touch and read your stories.


Love sally xxx

And australlia here I come! Xxxx
MrAndMrsMulholland chapter 24 . 1/5/2012
if it is Kate (she could or couldn't be her) the boy could never be Mike's son... it's 5 years later and the boy is a toddler... so if this was Kate and it is Mike's son she must have been pregnant for about 1,5 or 2 years.

but you're alowed to be excited... just wait for tomorrow and see (and read) the last chapter... :)
ALIMOO1971 chapter 27 . 1/5/2012
Ahha, i knew, i knew it i knew it (jump up and down) Kate still alive and her son... it mike son, isn't it, yes of cause it Mike son after all she did name him after his father. i wounder what Kate reaction is when she saw Mike with there son and how she had to lye to him. please up date soon... great chapter :-)
MrAndMrsMulholland chapter 27 . 1/5/2012
I don't mind lenghty reviews at all... I love them, in fact...

Glad you liked this chapter. It's so much more positive than the previous one. I really wanted to show that Mike found some happiness after Kate's death and that his life continued.

They're not going to live in Canberra though. She (Amber) had a job interview there but she didn't get the job. She is the new CO of Hammersley right now and like Mike said to Maxine. He wouldn't jeapordise Kate's safety by trying to find her.

Mike is convinced it was Kate he saw but wouldn't the woman have shown some recognition when they met? Mike sees what he wants to see, doesn't he?
littlemiss11 chapter 27 . 1/5/2012
Hi, that chapter was really good I thought it was happy when kate is stil alive if it is her.

I'm glad amber got the promotion and is co and going to cambarra.

I wonder that if them going to canbarra mike would look for kate.

And that mike moved on and now him and amber are together!

I really enjoyed it though.

P.s sorry for lengthy review last time.

Can't wait for next chapter

Love sally

littlemiss11 chapter 25 . 1/4/2012
hi sorry for the lengthy review,

im not really a fan of nikki.

i am looking forward to your next chapters.

i will review them.

no there was no really mistakes but i hate when people say you could of made that better.

thank-you for answering my questions.
ALIMOO1971 chapter 26 . 1/4/2012
Great sad, shocking chater, please tell me kate not dead but the feds got her in a safe house for the time being. Cauase if she was dead. Maxine would of seen her body but the doctor said no. So no one has seen her body got to wounder if she is alive or not. If she is dead how can the doctors miss some thing like eturnal bleeding. Swain would of pick it up if it was some one else so why how can the doctors miss it unless it a cover up... who knows. Please up date soon
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