|Reviews for The Straight and Narrow|
| Sheryl E W chapter 18 . 1/27
Beautifully put together, pulling in all the parts into a bow, I hope that makes sense :s
| Bluelikefriday chapter 17 . 1/18
I really love this story, and hope that you still have the inspiration to want to finish it.
It's nice to see you pick up on the lingering plot threads from AJ, that were so annoyingly pushed aside in DD, like where Apollo grew up, and why he came to admire Nick so much ect.
Everyone is so wonderfully in character, especially Ema, and it's great to see Machi get so involved. As, despite being so important to Lamiror, he almost never appears in anyone else's works.
Can't wait to read what happens next. You did say that the next chapter would be one of the last I believe...
| angrypixels chapter 17 . 8/21/2014
Hehehe so cute
| neon flights chapter 17 . 8/4/2014
Did a double-take when I saw this and another fic I favourited that hasn't updated in years suddenly update... good to have you back! This fic's as lovely as ever and your transition into writing this newest chapter is actually non-existent. Same old good old, still envious of your ability to write stuff that deliciously toes the edge of steamy (i cant write this sentence with a straight face why fgkhfs)
I love Machi's involvement in particular; him with Trucy and Pearl are a cracking and adorable group. Seeing Phoenix being an obtrusive pillock is also refreshing after playing Dual Destinies and something I didn't realise I missed until now!
| Sheryl E W chapter 17 . 7/15/2014
Brilliant! So good to see this story being finished. I wish you luck with your work and hope you get more time to rest and write xxx
| sempiternalle chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
God bless your writing skills, this is really really amazing.
| SasuNaruShipper chapter 16 . 5/8/2014
This is AWESOME! Can't wait to see more! 3
| mangoesandoatmeal chapter 16 . 4/3/2014
Oh my god. So much yes in this story. I will be waiting very impatiently until this updates. Please, please see my reviews and maybe have at least the slightest motivation to finish this story? IT'S SO GOOD. I especially love all this Apollo and Iris at the orphanage. You have thoroughly convinced me and it is now my head canon. Just, just update soon, okay? I don't think I could handle it if you didn't…
| mangoesandoatmeal chapter 14 . 4/3/2014
Oh my god stop dude I'm literally crying me eyes out THIS IS SO SAD BUT SO HAPPY OH GOD THESE LAST TWO CHAPTERS. Trucy crying… oh man… these last two chapters are probably the most emotional things I've ever read. I know you said you weren't happy with the chapter, but PLEASE reconsider. My tears are just compliments to how amazing this is.
| mangoesandoatmeal chapter 12 . 4/3/2014
GAH. That was so AMAZING. Because the hair wasn't really the hair, it was te image of Kristoph! This chapter and the one before it play beautifully together, because of the whole Mr. Gavin thing and then the hair cut. See, I'm not gonna give up leaving you reviews, because this story is too awesome! I can picture Klavier's new hair pretty well, too, so nice job on the descriptive stuff. Awesome chapter(s)!
| mangoesandoatmeal chapter 10 . 4/3/2014
Awwww, so cute! Part three of oncoming reviews! In regards to last chapter, nice work Apollo! It's so funny whenever Apollo is (or try's to be) seme, because Klavier's just this epic rock star and Apollo's a blushing mess. Kudos on that part! And this chapter was very cute, so happy Klavier makes Apollo happy! Yay for gay lawyers! I sincerely hope that as I'm typing this review you're typing the next chapter.
| mangoesandoatmeal chapter 8 . 4/3/2014
OH GOD KRISTOPH. YOU EVIL, EVIL, THING! He's so evil he's not a person. Poor Klavier! You wrote the scene very well though, so my emotions are actually a compliment to your writing! By the way, I like this so much that I'll be reviewing every other chapter or so, so I hope you don't mind. Loving this, it's so awesome! And Apollo kissing Klavier right there was the sweetest, most emotional thing ever! SO AWESOME.
| mangoesandoatmeal chapter 6 . 4/3/2014
I don't know why I didn't review sooner, but I LOVE THIS. Gyahh, it's so adorable! I love how Klavier is just preying after Apollo! This is an awesome work, and my only complaint is that it's not finished yet. So, um, yeah, please update and finish this! I want to read all of this!
| Clemy-sensei chapter 16 . 3/29/2014
second time I'm reading through it, same conclusion, please continue writing the fanfiction !
| JANJANBERRY chapter 16 . 3/9/2014
absolutely brilliant. best fanfic i've read yet, and i'm hoping there's more good stuff where this came from. -J.M.