Reviews for Betrayed
Dbztron2 chapter 1 . 8/13
That was great! No one ever seems to write stories about this weapon, so this was a nice change of pace. Good work!
nayumyst chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
That was... beautiful. I actually cried.
Reddiamond29 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Oh dear god! How can you say this is bad? I love it! It conveys her feelings expertly and the idea of it being from the weapon's point of view is absolutely amazing and pure genious! I will definitely recommend this to my friends!
GrossGirl18 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
I don't think this is bad. In fact I think it's a good interpretation of a rarely seen character. A little different then how I picture it, but still very good.
A Stranger chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Beautiful story.
A Stranger chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Beautiful story.