|Reviews for Pretty|
| fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Cute fluffy one shot described so it feels like a perfect summer day. Descriptions really worked to set the tone and the slow build up to Tenten's bikini surprise definitely highlighted Neji's attraction for her. Thanks for sharing!
| PotatoLizard chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
| Afriel chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I really like the way you use the present tense in your writing. Don't know why but to me it gives a sense of certainty (like "Tenten knows this because.."). I also like the little details of holidays like ice-cream!, catching up on reading and yes, overpriced tourist shops (which I always fall prey to :(
Oh and the hat! Haha I like the "un-hattish" part the best.
| Libby chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
And on more
| sanriochica333 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
very cute, i can picture the whole thing in my head
| ferbfletcherlover chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
cute :3 i like it :)
| Chicharito chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Short and cute. :D I like me a devious Tenten. And a glittering Neji - from sunblock, not from being a horribly written vampire.
| un4getabl3mem0ries chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
the imagery you used is very effective and now i miss the summer too ):
what a sharp contrast to the snow and the cold right now
| RedBirdsFly chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This is just fantastic!
You're a really talented writer! And I can't believe I haven't came across one of your NejiTen stories before, it's good to know that we can get some great NejiTen fanfiction to read from a person like yourself :)
I'm not sure if you'll be continuing this but I sincerely hope you will
| Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Love it! XD Love the image on a pretty, glittering Neji.
| Joyce chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Awwww this is so cute. I love that it's so short too, just right for a few minutes' bedtime reading.
| DarkAnonymous324 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Awesome job. :) Keep writing