Reviews for Pretty
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Cute fluffy one shot described so it feels like a perfect summer day. Descriptions really worked to set the tone and the slow build up to Tenten's bikini surprise definitely highlighted Neji's attraction for her. Thanks for sharing!
PotatoLizard chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
Pretty :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Afriel chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I really like the way you use the present tense in your writing. Don't know why but to me it gives a sense of certainty (like "Tenten knows this because.."). I also like the little details of holidays like ice-cream!, catching up on reading and yes, overpriced tourist shops (which I always fall prey to :(

Oh and the hat! Haha I like the "un-hattish" part the best.
Libby chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
And on more
sanriochica333 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
very cute, i can picture the whole thing in my head
ferbfletcherlover chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
cute :3 i like it :)
Chicharito chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Short and cute. :D I like me a devious Tenten. And a glittering Neji - from sunblock, not from being a horribly written vampire.

Well done!
un4getabl3mem0ries chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
the imagery you used is very effective and now i miss the summer too ):

what a sharp contrast to the snow and the cold right now
RedBirdsFly chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This is just fantastic!

You're a really talented writer! And I can't believe I haven't came across one of your NejiTen stories before, it's good to know that we can get some great NejiTen fanfiction to read from a person like yourself :)

I'm not sure if you'll be continuing this but I sincerely hope you will

Lunar x
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Love it! XD Love the image on a pretty, glittering Neji.

Keep writing!

Joyce chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Awwww this is so cute. I love that it's so short too, just right for a few minutes' bedtime reading.
DarkAnonymous324 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Awesome job. :) Keep writing