Reviews for Keep It Together
Roxas Destati chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
There are these moments when I just lie back and remember that you are a glorious human being and how damned appreciative I am over this fanfiction and how much I love reading it every time. Also, your KevEdd fics are darling indeed and I'm as impressed as always.

But jesus fucking christ this Gregary always makes my damn day and inspires me to try writing it again (or continue what I already started so very long ago, it's debatable).
Porn.Mercenary chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
So, I have to say I am totally jealous of Gary. How I could have used random sex at times of finals in college. Like seriously. I would have studied or actually done my work on time if I knew something like this would happen.

Who the fuck am I kidding? I never cared about my finals.

Anyway, carrying on. My favorite part of the entire fic, had to be:

"His knees are hitting the cabinets.

Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang."

I can't tell you why because I have no idea, but these two lines are what stuck out the most for me.

Here I am going to be critical for once. The one thing that I think would have helped a little, was actually having them move to the bathroom. I mean, maybe it was me reading this just right when I woke up, or something, but I actually scrolled back to see if they did move to the bathroom. That's probably as critical as I could ever get.

Just know that I want to draw some art for you. [there just isn't enough hours in a day to get everything done that I want to get done for you]
KirstenTheDestroyer chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Ah, the joys of college stress.

I'm so glad I finally got around to reading this. This was really sweet, and an interesting pairing that I really liked. I especially loved the ending bit, "But fuck finals, and fuck the end of the semester. Seriously." So gpoy it's amazing. You really caught the stress well. Arguments for no reason, staying up until forever, etc., it's all so vivid to me (maybe because it's my life, but whatever).

To be honest, the only thing I could think by the end was 'The Caffeine Addict and the Blonde Sex Addict.'

And then I laughed forever.

The end.
w0rmsign chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
lol at Gary's swearing experiments 3