|Reviews for Both Sides Now|
| Myrkin chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This is nice little story. Even though I've alwyas seen El-ahrairah as trickster who does tricks to get things he wants (or to get out of danger) and not someone who does pranks for laugh. That's not a flaw though. :)
You could use a beta-reader: a pearson who would read your story first and correct any msitakes. Sometimes you write in a way, that makes it a bit difficult to understand what you want to say. In this story there are a few long sentences, that could be broken into shorter sentences, making the whole thing easier to read.