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![]() ![]() ![]() HA! The guy who advise me this story was right all the way through. It's a superb story. Believable (except Dumbledores death being undiscovered so long), not too detailed, but with enough details to make it interesting and readable, wonderful. |
![]() ![]() This was amazing! The story was well written with strong beats, it never left you bored and it let so many fascets of unexplored logic and life within the HP universe actually explored! Thank |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. Did you do any other years? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Characterisation is non-existent - Harry is an experienced adult and not an affected kid. Plot is non-existent - Nobody other than Harry has agency at all. Setting is non-existent - Magic of the original canon is completely discarded. In other words, a solidly written 'fix everything' fantasy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story |
![]() ![]() A pretentious person written into a world of low-hanging fruit and yes-men. The concept is at first interesting, a number-oriented rule-exploiter makes for an interesting protagonist. Unfortunately this takes a turn into gradually more intense self-fluffing. The very universe itself bends in ever more unlikely ways to praise the supreme inherent excellence of this Gary Stue. I can't believe I found this recommended as rational fiction when there are no intelligent characters, nor coherent plot to be found. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ola me gusta mucho la historia Es algo diferente y refrescante la seguirás para los demás años o se kedara asi Me ha hecho intentar aprender idiomas en mi tiempo libre |
![]() ![]() ![]() Entertaining. |
![]() ![]() Me gusta mucho lo continuaras para el resto d los años o lo dejarás así Pero tengo una duda los cambios en la escuela son permanentes o irán cambiando con el tiempo y los años o k pasen conforme vayan avanzando en lugar d dejarlo fijo y el acabara sus estudios antes d k sea mayor d edad o se atrasará por ser el director Bss |
![]() ![]() Thank you for this story. I liked this version of Harry, his kindness to Hermione and interactions with the twins shows he understands people and indicates that he’ll find friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully done |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks ... this is a good variation on the usual Harry' Potter Thanks again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally found it! Been searchings for this fic for awhile! Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an adorable story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() Absolutely love your Harry Xd Great fic! |