Reviews for And All Was Right With the World
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
I quite like it!
BeeUtifulgirl chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
I read this years ago, before I even had an account, so I lost track of it...But it's defenitely one of the most thought-provoking stories I've read. I remember really liking it, though the injustice of the whole idea made me want to scream. (I was a dramatic fourteen-year-old) Good job. The fact that you could generate so much emotion in a piece which is free of the usual whining and moping that generally comes through in less talented work is amazing. It's still unfair, but the story's an amazing piece of work.
sexypancake chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Interesting. This story is a nice contradiction. Harry uses dark arts to kill the dark lord, and then is more or less declared a dark criminal himself. I like it. Nice.
Hiead chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
It is amazing!
Heksie chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
well this a short fic - could make a good chapter in a fic.
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
bastards and bitches( if anything, i know umbridge is involved with this kind of idiot law)... the Ministry of Magic epic , jagged and wholly bizarre and gloomy.

Makes a person want to ask: is there such a thing as justice?

maybe yes and maybe not...

but in your world, it's twisted...

very nice!

I agree with Zarafan( even though the review was made in 2004)
SorridoSole chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
o0o0o! awesome! that was like, idk, really unexpected, and i love it so so much!
yumeniai chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
OMG, that's that so sad! i wanna cry...
Bottan chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
That's just gloomy... o.o' But very well written nonetheless! xD Liked it, I especially like the way you describe Malfoy's feelings, like that eye-thing. I thought it to be very fitting. :3
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Its great. please continue it.
Trinity Day chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Probably not all that likely, but it certainly made for a good story.
Switchblade237 chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Very well written - dark, angsty, and keeps you guessing. I like the twist at the end- Harry's in Azkaban, not Draco. Well done.
zafaran chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
Wow. Short, sharp, and utterly distopian. Nice work. I'm working my way through your collected works in chronological order so I don't know if you've written a sequel to this, but it sure would make a hell of a foundation story for a series of AU stories. Congratulations. Zafaran
hedtia chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Oh my GOD! That end is soo awful, I can't believe it! The story is not long, but wht is written in it, is totaly great. First the smalltalk, and then suddenly the change of action and the dementors. In the end one has such a big feeling of helplessness and injustice, it'a really awful!

I will go on to the sequel now!


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