|Reviews for Surrogate of Zero|
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/7
Shinji shows a remarkable ignorance of the purpose of copyright (encouragement of further works _for people to enjoy_, if it's working against it's very reason for existence it should go) and the reason for the anti-stealing norm (zero sum game with security or disruption externalities) for someone with a repository of human knowledge in his head.
| Donderkind chapter 7 . 1/15
This is too good not to continue. That it's Asuka narrating is perhaps the most brilliant ploy I could imagine. Great characterization too. looking forward the the rescue mission!
| The Absent Dungeon Master chapter 7 . 10/31/2013
You Frikkin Glorious Wordsmith! this thing is awesome. Its so full of win the it is Tankred Approves (TWINS THEY WHERE). Please continue, and let this continue! BLUHD FOR SOHRYU! LANCES FOR DA LANCE THRONE!
...now im imagining a deific Asuka on an iron-throne knockoff made of multiple Longinuses
...and more Shinji and WH40k would be nice *the commentator states and he bludgeons an equine corpse with a croquet mallet*
| Gundam Kaiser chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
I read Points of Familiarity. It was pretty good.
Then I read Surrogate of Zero. It is FUCKING _AMAZING_.
Hope to see an update someday.
| CaptainDistraction chapter 7 . 9/6/2013
Wow, this is a really great story I'd love to see where it ends up going
| floatingmangocake chapter 7 . 8/26/2013
I do hope they'll kick his arse.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/11/2013
I love you and your stories
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/11/2013
LOL at the tsundere part.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Its hilarious alright.
| Grey Muji chapter 7 . 5/19/2013
This is really good! So Shinji is now the 'true' 18 Angel: Lilim? Does he have the Spear of Longinus? I'm getting off track the story is very good, it seems too be going a bit on the slow side but otherwise still good. Sorhyu and Ayanami occasional words give the narration unique feel.
| Metroidvania chapter 7 . 4/8/2013
Well. That was something.
Amazing prose utilizing Asuka (and Rei) to offset a post-instrumentality God-esque Shinji. Everyone's a bit exaggerated, but with the amount of pure shit they've been through, I'm not surprised.
As for a possible villain, cliche though it may be, possibly summoning some variant of Gendo? Problem is that if Shinji ever has to get serious, the power levels are going to scale out of control way too fast.
Anywho, it looks like it's been a while, but if this ever did come about again, I'd be more than willing to read. Love the D&D references and such.
| Mel chapter 7 . 2/20/2013
Love this fic! Asuka's narration is brilliant, she should be the voice of every documentary. Well, she could trade off with Morgan Freeman sometimes, but - anyway! I love Sohryu the war goddess, and I love how much Asuka loves being Sohryu the war goddess. The duel was awesome - wonderfully understated use of reality breaking powers - and I look forward to seeing what shennanigans will occur at Mott's manor.
| Border42 chapter 7 . 2/6/2013
Interesting. Here's to hoping Shinji will really show them the definition of a "Out Of-context Problem."
| I am myself chapter 7 . 1/12/2013
All hail lord Bhepin, can we please have more of this fic, given that the universe and myself included need a good laugh, which Shinji getting beaten up in anyway usually delivers.
| DirtNap chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
Well having not been updated in a year...its still a very humourous story so far. If you do decide to update it I'll be following.