Reviews for Say Goodnight And Go
cellaria chapter 7 . 4/10/2014
Aw lol this was really cute! I wish it were longer & a bit more drawn out but for how short it was there was a nice bit of angst & build up. The sex was hot too! Though it seemed a bit.. idk maybe.. presumptuous of bunny that kotetsu would just bottom lol from the beginning he's worrying over him being married, so straight etc.. So it seemed a bit weird he would just expect to be the one fucking instead of getting fucked?lol I mean I think they're hot both ways but it didn't really seem to fit for the first time. So I kinda think it should've been the other way first.. or at least the second time definitely seemed like it should've been kotetsu on top. I can't picture them not switching..or at least not with bunny as seme. If anything I see bunny as uke more often.. But besides that I thought the writing & characterizations were pretty good. I hope you do some more :)
Elyda chapter 7 . 12/3/2013
Wow...for non writer you really write very well, I mean REALLY well...actually I had knots in my stomach when I read 5 and 6 chapters, you can feel the anxiety of characters (especially Bunny's), all those emotions and feelings they are going through...really beautiful written. It's very easy to visually imagine all the story, because of details and realistic feeling of the story (because that's how people would react in real life and not some "confessionoh, I love you toohappy ever after").
Anyway, thank you for this wonderfull story and I hope to read more from you _
Anonymous chapter 7 . 4/13/2013
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Seriously. I read it through several times on a few separate occasions before I finally just had to leave you a review and let you know that I enjoyed it so much. Your writing style is fabulous; I have no complaints. I absolutely loved the way you got into each character's head - i.e., Barnaby's thoughts about his growing interest in Kotetsu and Kotetsu's thoughts about Tomoe - and how each one's feelings for one another conflicted with other feelings, thoughts, and actions. Every action and thought was so well-detailed that I could easily visualize and sympathize with the two of them. You also did a great job keeping Barnaby and Kotetsu in character given their respective situations in life and in relation to one another. And thank you for keeping it realistic in that Kotetsu actually considered that he might be making a mistake (but, of course, I'm happy that he was able to reconcile his feelings for his wife with his feelings for Barnaby in the end!). It seems that it came full circle, as well, since Barnaby seemed a bit unsure in Chapter 1 whether or not he should go ahead with his "mission": he thinks himself an idiot even though he knows what he wants, even if reluctance or uncertainty about Kotetsu's reaction might hinder it.
I did notice a few mistakes (punctuation, etc.), but overall your writing style was so involving that they were basically negligible in terms of affecting my enjoyment of the story.
Maybe this will sound horrible (I'm not a sadist, really!), but I loved the way you described Barnaby's thought process after Kotetsu said that he made a mistake. The sudden rejection, the mental picture of a heart literally breaking. The flow of your story is incredibly well-paced and believable, and the curve ball thrown into the muddle of Barnaby's "mission" only adds to the depth and complexity of emotion and thought relevant to each one of the characters. Congratulations on capturing one of the most difficult things to fully describe and elaborate upon in writing: emotion. Well done. I hope to see more fanfics from you in the future!
Cali18love chapter 7 . 2/19/2013
This was a very cute story! Aww million heart
kyouruhi24 chapter 7 . 12/10/2012
loved this soooo much!

this couple is sooo endearing...and you wrote them soo well.
fuuma82 chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
So sweet... I'm really glad they're finally together :)
Crystal Hope Dragon chapter 7 . 11/22/2012
I loved it! So heartfelt, so detailed, it was like we were watching this happen in the real show. Please keep up the great work.
ToLazyToLogIn chapter 7 . 11/17/2012
I love this fic x3 I was kind of freaking out in the last chapter, but now it's all good VuV and I love the whole Tiger Lilies and Rabbit Tracks thing. xDD There's an ice cream called Bunny Tracks though, so now I want ice cream...
xXx.Taki.Aya.Miyamoto.xXx chapter 7 . 11/17/2012
Very cute and a total roller coaster. You kept their characters pretty damned well too! XD Thank you for the wonderful read.
DeViLaNgEl11 chapter 7 . 10/26/2012
Aw that was really cute! I really enjoyed this. All of the feelings were just right. I liked how you included the feelings Kotetsu still has for his wife and it actually made me think that they weren't gonna get together in the end. Of course I'm happy they did though. Those sex scenes were incredibably hot! I loved them and not once did Barnaby become OOC loved it! And their playful banter at the end of this chapter was too adorable!

*Crystal*
Billie the fourth sage chapter 7 . 10/7/2012
Bwaaaaahh these two. I am never not gonna imagine Bunny being lovesick over Kotetsu, whether it's reciprocated or not. Still, love this! Thank you!
SylverAeon chapter 7 . 8/29/2012
The last chapter is updated! I'm really happy and sad at the same time, happy because they ended together, and sad because is the end! But happiness wins in the end!
Keia-Marie chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
That lemon was hot. Very hot. It was almost primitive the way Barnaby took Kotetsu like that. And while Kotetsu was a bottom, he still stuck me as an Alpha male and Barnaby's equal. And I can tell how hard you worked on this chapter - I noticed quite a few improvements, so again, kudos to you! However, at one point I felt the flow of the story was interrupted by Barnaby telling Kotetsu he hated him. For me, it felt too strong of a word choice. Anyway, I'm sad to see this story come to an end. But hopefully their relationship will develop from here! Great job on this story, I really enjoyed reading it. :)
Ash Likes Lemons chapter 6 . 8/22/2012
Aw! Poor barnaby! I hope your making kotetsu have same feelings for him or else i will die X.X
KSBLover88 chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
OMG Please update soon ; A ; dang you cliffhangers!
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