|Reviews for Withering Flowers|
| Awesome Rapidash chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Aw what a sweet story! I really liked the way you use details and descriptions, it makes it very easy for me to paint a picture of what's happening in my mind.
I think Will is best with Lily, so I was pleased with how this story ended. Though I wish there could have been a bit more to it. But that's just my opinion. Well written and a nice read!
keep up the good work!
| TopazSunshine chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This is lovely. Its filled with hope and longing. The Firefly flower bit fits in perfectly, and your descriptions paint the images in my head. Fantastic work.
And Chelsea belongs with Mark :) Just kidding, I think either guy is fine, and I'm more on Will's side.
| Diamondgigas chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
This is great! Lily and Will FTW. I also don't know if you should pair Chealsea with Vaungh or Will. It's up to you. :D
| SweetieLove chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Wow. Someone who actually wrote a fic that has Lily in it and to think that it's also your first.
I like it. I really do. I could've appreciated it more if you expanded the ending.
But you did a great job. :)