|Reviews for Returning the Favor|
| acsgrlie chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Aw loved this!
| Saxophones chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
I love this! This is like my favorite story I've read in a really long time.
| BTRlover98 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Oh my goodness. This was adorable. I'm crying.
I loved this! Great job! (:
| BigTimeStarWars chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Awww. So sweet :')
| Rockport268 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Oh my god...that was so sweet...I think I almost cried.
But oh my god...words can't even express what I'm feeling right now. Whatever ends up coming out's not gonna be nearly as somber as it should be.
Well, I'll try anyway.
So Katie started out as all people do: as a baby. A tiny, helpless, crying, smelly baby. Kendall wasn't sure what to think about her, but he soon came to love and protect her. And he got so sad when she no longer needed his protection.
But oh my god...when she was 3...
"When her teary eyes notice him enter from the shadows, she hides her face in shame. She doesn't like people seeing her weak."
That's Katie...that is sooooooo Katie! Even at the age of 3...
She is such a Knight :) I'll bet their dad didn't like to cry either...
And then when she started school...
"He knows Katie can handle it, but doubts the other kids can handle her."
Ha ha oh Katie...
And when she learned how to play 5 card stud...and gamble...and only left one cookie for her big brother...
My heart broke along with Kendall's.
But eventually Kendall accepted that that's just who Katie is...once he did that, his heart was instantly whole again.
Or maybe it was a gradual process...
And oh my god when Kendall was upset...Katie was just amazing. She offered him comfort, free of charge, free of words...
And then at the end when Kendall sang to Katie...oh my god. You know, come to think of it, she must miss that. A lot. He had to have done it more in Minnesota...
Kendall and Katie's relationship is just...3
| bookbabe68 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
it's so sweet
| d3activat3d chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Oh my god.
This was... amazing. Beautiful, actually. Like.. I can't even begin to mention how amazing this was. The way you explained every change, every little thing between Katie and Kendall was just... amazing. I am speechless!
Ugh. I love this so much. You have no idea how much I am loving this. I am in love.
I love how Kendall started out possibly not liking Katie, to loving her and making sure she's safe and stuff. You know, this story really shows what great a brother Kendall is. Dude. I am crying. This was so beautiful, I'm not even kidding. The way you wrote how Kendall felt about Katie through each little moment was so great. Especially when things started changing? When Kendall realized he didn't need to lift her up, when he realized she can gamble, ..Oh. My. Gosh.
I'm so much in love.
This made me cry, when Kendall started crying and Katie suddenly finds him and hugs him and ugh. That is so sweet. This is such a sweet story, I love it so much. And when Kendall thinks back to widdle Katie in the pink cocoon blanket, I die.
"She's changed everything." I love it.
Ah, I keep repeating myself, but I really love it all.
This has to be one of the best Katie-Kendall fics I have ever read, and I love it, so, so much. Especially the end. When Kendall waits in the hall for Katie, just in case. And how like, he finds her from going from cute to beautiful, I am just in love! You are an amazing author. No lie. Your writing style is beautiful and this was written extremely beautifully, I'm not joking. I love this so much and I love your writing, you're really, really talented. So.. after this very long babble I'm going to just say that this was AMAZING, and yea... I love it!
| happygirl57 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
This was literally the sweetest, most adorable thing ever. Each scene was so well written that I could imagine it perfectly. This was beyond amazing and I loved it. The thoughts that went through Kendall's head was very... Kendall-ish. It was so amazingly sweet and I loved it.
| bluestring chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
It was really beautiful!
| purpleangel4197 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
this was AMAZING!...so cute and sweet and a great theme! I LOVED it! :)
| TiffDizzle chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
omg *wipes tear* that was beautiful and shows the softer side of a relationship of a brother and sister...makes me miss my brother! We were the closest out of 4 kids and he's off in the military! Great job :D