Reviews for Still Alive
LawlAdorkableTurtles chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Txysjhdgxjsjhdhdnt g,agrabahhhhhhh this is AMAZING. The flownofnthe story is very nice, and I love Yomiel's point of view and just YomielSisselYomielSisselYomiel arrrfghhhhh. I loved it. It was really great :)
The Fangirling Gourgeist chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
This is so cute!
Songlian chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I really enjoyed this sweet after game fic. Made me feel all happy inside so thanks for sharing!
infinitylexi chapter 1 . 12/26/2011

This is really good, but it was bothersome to read for one specific reason. Maybe I'm just a picky reader, I don't know.

But the fact that the punctuation was out of place in the dialogue really irked me.

For example: "Indeed" he answers.

Should be... "Indeed," he answers.

I know it's a small difference, but nevertheless a difference. Then again, it could be me being a picky reader...

Otherwise, your story is really good.