|Reviews for A Shocking Experience|
| nemikconi new sora chapter 13 . 2/15
when are you updating the story
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/22
Why not let Naruto get some Ionic Powers in the Forest of Death?
| gears265.1 chapter 1 . 1/17
shit did not mean to send that to use sorry can you remove that -oc list and again sorry
| gears265.1 chapter 13 . 1/17
Nickname: EXTREME Ninja aka hero name
evil name black thunder different personality
name Xavier Last name Son
Family: Parents (john and sara son)
Hometown: Brooklyn New york
Hair Color/Style/Length dark brown / Spiked/ Short
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5 10"
Body Type: Slim, tall
History (Be Detailed):Born NYC aka new York city also as know as empire city Manhattan hospitals. His parents are john and Sara. Move out at the age of 19 teen to Seattle . He got his powers through meditation and when anther ray sphere went off. He discover his powers by trying to use energy manipulation for making a energy ball. Now with his powers he chooses to help people. Also looking for his parents that were taken from him at the age of 17 by the DUP. Now he searches for them and hoping for reuniting
Neutral Personality(In depth): confident at first when he is around people he knows, like when he see new people he get nervous and anxiety. But when he gets to know them he friendly all the time.
Hero Personality (In depth): Proud to be a conduit that has pass his limitations using his powers for good. He will go out of his way just to save anyone even good or bad.
Villain Personality (In depth): gone crazy and talk to him self and kills anyone in his way If they don't listens to his plans or haves his way and shows no mercy.
Origin of Powers see above
Powers: Can make his energy tighten his skin for protection against bullets and blades and to give his attacks an extra bit of power. Extremely agile and acrobatic (Can wall run and climb very well as use really acrobatic fighting moves like back flip also he can fly with his energy for only for 2 hours )He uses the environment for his advantage by visualizing energy around him by changing the environment to his liking. like aerokinesis hydrokinesis, pryokinesis, and atomkinesis .ps can make energy attacks like energy blast and ball only for last resort (extreme use of energry though). For got to mention that he can absorbs energy to heal and be at full power again.
Name of Powers (It has to be related to what your powers are): energy wave also energy field (energy). Kin (Camouflage)
Weakness (If using to much energy leave him weak and defenseless )
Neutral Clothes: Jeans, plain black t shirt and a grey jacket.
Hero Clothes:green trousers,blue long sleeve shirt, black trench coat with a hood, eyes masks .
Villain Clothes: Black t Shirt with a red tie , and black jeans and wears a helmet.
Likes(at least five): Chinese food (F*ck yeah), playing video games, parkour, meditations, reading.
Dislikes(at least five): bullies, doing nothing, cold environments , crime, racism.
Neutral, Hero, or Villain, or debating between the three(?): Hero.
| Kithrin chapter 11 . 1/11
question, since cole was able to absorb electricity, did naruto get that as well? and if he did, does that make lightning jitsu useless against him?
| LelouchXKallen chapter 1 . 1/11
The story was great at the beginning but you said he was going to get paired with hinata I mean WTF I so tired and pissed off at tht pairing do something like naruto and yugito something thts cool
| Kavell Anderson chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
Sorrey if i seamed a bit mean but I really love this story. The reason i sed thos things was because a lot of storys i read only get updated once a year. So sorrey for what i sed . Like I sed I really love this story .Hope you have a lovely x-mas with your female.
| ColeMacGrath chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
Awesome. Keep it up. Oh yeah quick question. Is naruto gonna get some of the negative karma powers? Like nix?
| LupineKing chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
Man I love this story! I like that you're making it so that many people have their eyes on naruto; acknowledging him for his strength and skill.
I'm just a bit worried though, right now it seems that naruto has no friends his age. the closest thing he has is Konohamaru. All he seems to have are rivals and enemies.
Could you punt someone into the role maybe have him as a sort of brotherly partner/best friend and confidant? Could be an OC or just someone from the leaf.
| LupineKing chapter 8 . 12/26/2013
Woah! I'm guessing those two ronin are not going to be attacking the household if the entire team are at the bridge ...or are they?
I also like the way naruto is progressing in strength and ability though I'm wondering whether there will be anymore of those 'karma points'.
| gamelover41592 chapter 13 . 12/25/2013
| Jebest4781 chapter 13 . 12/25/2013
well this was fun and gonna get interesting on how things will go for the exams and such.
| TheInnerBeast chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Naruto was born with the whisker Marks if you watch the anime it shows them when Tobi was holding him when the kyuubi was still inside his mother the marks are because of the kyuubi but the marks are from his mother being the previous host
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Naruto's whiskers are birth marks because of contact with the foxes chakra when he was in his moms womb.
| Kavell Anderson chapter 12 . 12/7/2013
stop writing wordes apart and finsh a shocking experience.