|Reviews for When the Lights Go Down|
| Silverwing26 chapter 15 . 11/11/2013
Where do I even begin...
Well I have dedicated my day to this story, and it drew me in, in the very first chapter. Honestly, I was so drawn in, I didn't even stop to review chapters. I hope you don't mind that I'm about to pour it all out here.
First of all, oh my word how I love the plot. I love the funtom company as a record label and I adore DIE. That was a brilliant take on Ciel's company and Sebastian's dark side.
The long running theme of fighting one's inner demons is so universal and so well written. I adore it.
Ciel and Sebastian... oh my god. Your characters are amazing. You managed to bring a vulnerability to Sebastian that I haven't ever seen before. It struck home really strongly for me. Oh how relatable he became. Ciel is so strong at times and so stupid at others. These things make him really easy to identify with also. Watching every moment of their relationship bloom though, was pure awesome.
Elizabeth was so fun and so endearing. I love her cast as Ciel's best friend, as a mother lion, and truly as the voice of reason.
Undertaker, He had me on edge the entire time, which is perfect. You can't help but love him for being so protective over Sebastian, and then he annoyed me so much for being so against Ciel. He was perfect.
I loved the ending of the story. The slow rebuilding of trust and eventual admission of love and consummating that love was such a beautiful and fitting end.
The two additional chapters were such a treat. I loved the story so muc it was a joy to get to see there was more. Once again, go Elizabeth! And THANK GOD he finally put Claude in his place.
oh! Soot! It was like seeing an old friend from Devil's Canvas!
You're extremely talented in your writing. Thank you for sharing with us and for delighting me with a story that is going to become one of my favorites to revisit.
| Shounen-aiLover23 chapter 9 . 8/25/2013
OMG i was ready to slap the the crap out of elizebeth when she said that but then i was ready to hug her for helping ciel realize that he liked sebastian
ur an amzing author and i fogive u for saying such awful things about sebastian :)
| Theia Pallas chapter 15 . 8/18/2013
when i started reading this, i didn't expect so much. really glad i read this!
| Gih Bright chapter 15 . 8/11/2013
Oh, this fic was sooooooooooooooo sweeet! I liked the "betty-Bastian" ahauhauhauahuahuaha but to being sincere? He reminded me Ticky Mikky from d gray man. Not in personality, but because when tiky fist appears in the show, He wore thick glasses, messy hair, weird clothes and talked funny. But after it was revealed that he was a noah, wow, sexy voice (that of Minato Naruto), beautiful hair without the stupid glasses, a cigarette to seduce.
(take off the enter)
How he really is:
(take off the enter)
I loved Sebastian in this fic! I guess i prefer him falling in love into Ciel first , I mean this make things be cuttiest (i don't even know if this word existed on your language o_O) . I'd love too the way you work with confidence in a relationship in this fic, as so beutifull, because love is important, but withouthis love won't get so far.
I have to admiti it for myself: i kind prefer ClaudexCiel than ClaudeXSebastian. I saw in your profile some ClaudexSebastian, but I can't visualize then together like a couple like i can saw ClaudexCiel. One day i'll try change my mind and try read some fic of then, because I can't say "i don't like" without know it, and the way to find it is reading some fic of then both.
Ok, this review doesn't have a leack of sense, and i must have to go. Beutifull fic!
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/5/2013
Okay, so I just finished this fic. At first, with the whole porn company thing, I figured this would be hilarious and smutty, but ended up being SO sweet. Ciel and Sebastian's relationship in this one, I think, is absolutely beautiful. I think that, although sadistic, Sebastian being kind of insecure (the notes afterwards and such) is absolutely adorable, and I love it. A, 10/10 would recommend, thanks for a great fic!
| Kuro-Otaku292 chapter 15 . 7/5/2013
Aaaaawwwww tht was a sweet chptr and I hate claude in this story which is strange really cause in seeing in the dark I like claude and hate alois in as a rule I dislike claude like alois and in this I hate claude and no feelings towords alois and I like ciel and Sebastian in all the story's.
Add in a valentines day and a ciel kitty cosplay and alois if u can and more madame red...I took a which kuroshitsuji character are u most like and it said I was most like madame red..fairly accurate since my fav couler is red and I plan to study biology whn iam oldr and necome a heart or brain surgeon my first *cought* victim *cough* patient will be one of my friend...3
| hopeless mitsuki chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
So many feels for sebastian ! To not be accepted for who we really are...that 's just so sad that i want to cry! Don't worry sebastian,i promise you ciel will fallait for you ! Lol
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/31/2013
OH MY FUCKING GOD.
I can't even say how much I love this story. TEARS WERE SHED every time I read it. That's right. I read it more than once. That's how much I love it.
Ugh. I can't. *sniffles*
| 02181014 chapter 15 . 5/29/2013
it's really great story! i really love your story .
| EatAPineapple chapter 13 . 5/16/2013
beautifull story! definitly one off my favorites!
Maybe nobody cares but I suggest listening to Read All About It from Emeli Sande, it suits Sebastian really well I think :)
Never stop writing 3
| Cheska chapter 15 . 5/2/2013
That was really good! It was a fun read from beginning to end and showed how much Sebastian loved Curling. Any. sane person would have left a long time ago but not our Sebs.
| Christian.SIMC chapter 11 . 4/16/2013
I'm on a cliff hanger here! Help ! Update this story...OMG! you should get this made into an anime and sold!
| Christian.SIMC chapter 6 . 4/16/2013
Just gotta make a few comments on this page. I laughed out loud when you stated - wounder if he knows sign language. That is a "hearing persons ((Voice)) comming through. I am hard of hearing and people are surprised at how many people learn sign language that are deaf or hard of hearing all their lives. The public demands deaf to look and act hearing. Dispite the fact that so much is not understood by the deaf person. It is more important to be seen as hearing.
I write back and forth all the time and people at banks and places hate it. You learn no one want s to take the time to get to know you. only another deaf person is interested sincerely.
Ceil has 3 men he is in a web with. It is curious that Sebastian knows Ceil is getting closer to the non voice personna and still does dirty things as a master. Why is that? If he wants Ciel to get to know the mute side of him.
The fact that Ciel started all this to get close to Claude has not come out. Shame this secret was not voiced to have a clean slate with Sebastian. Ciel is playing a game with all three men. Even if he does not realize it himself fully.
Sebastian will be hurt iether way. Will Sebastian make Ciel choose between the "Master" or the mute? Hope you keep updating this story - I will finish reading it today.
FYI: I am severely hard of hering and do not like to voice in public - because I end up yelling and do not pronounce words correctly apparently. But I force myself to appear hearing to get a job. I see the public reaction and I cannot stand most of them and their egos having to put up with someone demanding they write some of what they say. Even my coworkers constantly "Test" to see if I understand and act like shits when I dont. ANd surprised if I do. Hauty bastards - and they assume I am mental not all there since I do not hear. THat little information eats at me. I work my butt off to prove them to be less - I take on the cleaning jobs or anything they refuse to do - but instead of respect by boss - they only see it as it fits my abilities I wounder?
Anyway - on with the story
| Christian.SIMC chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
| LockedOut chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Claude is, yes, a means to an end. But still I say EEEWEWWEEWEWWEWEWEWWEWWEEEW.
ahem. Anyways, very good it just looks like it could use a quick proofread. I love your stories - locked out of my account or I would be favoring left and right - but you have a tendency not to put question marks where they need to be and mixing up words and sometimes dropping parts of sentences.