|Reviews for When the Lights Go Down|
| MariahMichaelis chapter 15 . 8/20
Hi DM! I meant to do this before but really it’s long overdue (since 2012 really! ‘hide in shame’, I’ll post both on FF and AO3).
I’m in love with When the lights go down. It’s a masterpiece, a top-tier in my list (TDC being # 1) and I more than often revel in reading it, sometimes a full chap, sometimes one tiny sentence « You have unique eyes », « Sebastian was master », « one more try, this is your last one »… I could go on and on. Absolutely beautiful, amazing, so sweet, so pleasurable.
Let me tell you how I marvel at your portrayal of Sebastian, if I wasn’t already massively nose bleeding over the man, here I was swooning. He’s so handsome, so breathtaking, so pure, so kind, so desperately in love with Ciel. Your ability to make a complete mess of Sebastian is something that I admire in your style, how you turn him so vulnerable, so broken and yet so poised to keep his secret is captivating. Ah what smart man! I wasn’the least concerned by his lies to Ciel. Who wouldn’t act the same when one is blatantly rejected because of physical appearance?
In this view, Ciel needed to be taught that moral lesson of life, he was too full of himself and hollow. Bet he wasn’t expecting falling this hard. On more than one occasion I wanted to slap him so hard for being such an inconsiderate bastard. As the story went, I found it spell-binding how he changed and became more mature. A jealous Ciel over Finny was priceless ! A wanton Ciel was icing on cake ! Needless to say the smut is blazing hot and while the plot took place in the porn industry (man that was a move !) I didn’t find vulgar, Sebastian’s feelings and state of mind took the lead.
DM, thank you a million for your majestic work, it’s gold among the fandom ! The ride was bliss. To me, reading it again is paramount. It feels good, cosy, your artistic talent knows how to stir emotions in readers. Know that I’ve read all your Sebaciel stories (except one dealing with death, you know which one I’m sure as it’s too much a sensitive matter for me).
How your wonderful writers compel me and delivered without asking anything in return (well except reviews) is a true blessing. And I don’t mind gushing, you should be rewarded for your work just like any best sellers out there. I’m glad to see that you were back on AO3 and I’m eager to read some more from you.
| LaFangirl13 chapter 12 . 8/12
I didn't think it was that easy, but I'm glad. Lol I was kinda hoping that Ciel got into an accident and Sebastian could stop doing whatever he was doing and just see what a sad state Ciel was without him. I would have loved to see him suffer in regret at how much pain he caused Ciel, but that's a bit over used... I LOVE HOW U HANDLED IT! I couldn't imagine actually talking it out, wow. That was so good. Only 3 more chapters left... Oh no.
| LaFangirl13 chapter 11 . 8/12
UGH MY HEART! I LOVE IT BUT ITS KILLING ME! ! OMG HE SAID HE LOVE SEBBY! IM so freaking happy rn. I'm crying becuase thank The Lord! I wish SEBASTIAN could have heard that
| LaFangirl13 chapter 10 . 8/12
OMG CIEL WHY IM DEAD IM DONE IM SO DONE THIS IS IT! Just 5 more chapter, it's okay, I can take 5 more chapters if this fanfic. THIS FANFIC IS HELL! ITS MAKIMF ME FEEL HAPOY THEN SAD THEN HAOPY THEN ANGRY THEN SAD! MY EMOTIONS ARE BROKEN! ITS TOO GOOD! TOO GOOD! This fanfic is the reason I love this. I love this so much Ｏ（）Ｏ
| LaFangirl13 chapter 8 . 8/12
I love fluff but that was sad. Why u leave Ciel
| LaFangirl13 chapter 7 . 8/12
IM ADVFRYYTFRGYN YAYYY I WANT U TO WANT MORE WANTING OF SEBASTIAN. This Babybel is good, not the non fat one tho
| LaFangirl13 chapter 6 . 8/12
Mixed emotions mess me up. I'm so happy becuase Ciel and Sebastian got closer and I got really excited when Sebby told Ciel that it sounds like he's falling for him. IM LIKE UGHHHH I LOVE IT! But Damn Undertaker tho! I mean ur hot and ur so cool and ur hair is life but bro... WHY CANT U LET MY OTP BE! U SHIP IT! I SHIP IT! WE ALL SHIP IT! Writing Sebastian each time is a lot of work
| LaFangirl13 chapter 4 . 8/12
Noooo! That's just too evil! I'm so so so so sad! How could you make Ciel do that? Poor Ciel! I really felt that, I felt like crying and my heart hurts intensely
| LaFangirl13 chapter 3 . 8/12
Sebastian sweetie... WHY CQNT U JUST LET CIEL KNOW THAT UR SUPER HOT!, THEN U COULD LOVE EACH OTHER AND CIEL WILL ACCEPT U
| LaFangirl13 chapter 2 . 8/12
UGH CIELLL U DONT EVEN KNOW! Plus, you don't even know why u find Sebby unattractive. U only think that becuase u never cared! U HAVE TO LOVE HIM! UR GONNA BE MORE CURIOUS ABOUT SEBASTIAN SO U CAN FIND OUT AND GET HIM TO TALKKKKKKKKKK GUUHGUUGHFUGHHTHUSHFIEHRJDJSN THIS SHIP KILLS ME
| LaFangirl13 chapter 1 . 8/12
OMG IMAGINE IF SEBASTIAN WORKS FOR DIE OR OWNS IT OMG OMG OMG IM DEAD! AND HES SECRETLY HOT AND HES ONLY ACTING TO BE UGLY BC SEBBY IS SO CUTE!
| SaiyaCat chapter 15 . 7/11
| Amora.Lee chapter 10 . 6/10
That has just be a kick to the gut,how could Ciel fall more deeply in lust with a maliciously bastard like Claude after that. Screw him Bastian and strike out from undrr your brother
| xx.annaliese chapter 11 . 5/13
I swear if this situation doesn't end happy I'm going to die a slow, painful death caused by the creeping inset of insanity combined with mental trauma.
| xx.annaliese chapter 10 . 5/13
I stopped reading at, "Claude," and I'm so scared to continue, my feels are going to get torn from me aren't they?