|Reviews for My adventure with shadow the hedgehog|
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
omg you drowned omg
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
ok that was a good story but i dony understand it atall
| PootisHolliday chapter 11 . 3/21/2012
It's Mobians, bro!
| Mr.GoodWriter96 chapter 10 . 2/9/2012
OMF(reakin')G, that was an epic chapter. Sad ending, bit good chapter. Continue as soon as you can.
| Mr.GoodWriter96 chapter 7 . 1/29/2012
CONTINUE. This is a boss story. Sure there are a few grammar and spelling errors every here and there, but those can be overlooked. Point is, awsome story, and update, ASAP.
| WinterMuffin chapter 6 . 1/6/2012
| WinterMuffin chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
Oh...Chaos...ZOMC WTO GONNA HAPPEN!
| RedEmerald6 chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
Was the death to soon?
| WinterMuffin chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
Yay! new chapter~ This is STILL interesting. I know. Cool. yeah. Awe-
Kat (My OC no one knows about): WE GET THE CHAOS DROWNED PICTURE!
Update soon please!
| WinterMuffin chapter 2 . 1/2/2012
Another great chapter, this looks promising!
| WinterMuffin chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Cool! Update soon please!
| Terribly Sharp chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
If you are really considering writing, using grammar would help (not to mention capitalization).
Your story is in a dismal state as it is, perhaps removing it and starting over would allow you to do a better job next time?
This story plot has been reused over and over (I know better than most considering I have even written a story like this long ago). Perhaps it would be better to write about something else?
If you would like any help, just ask me. :) This story needs a lot of work, but perhaps it can be saved yet.