|Reviews for Be careful what you wish for|
| LARRY chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
FUCK YOU AND YOUR SHITTY MARY SUE!
| scoutmasterkb28 chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
Hmmm... I like how the way this is going, though i like to add a few suggestions.
You could change the way some of the characters speak(especially Nu Mous, Moogles and Banggaas) to be in character... For example, The Nu Mou is a race with profound knowledge and wide range of vocabulary, so your Nu Mous should have more advicing lines and not something like "Be careful." That's my advice for now.
Cheers and keep writing :D
| kenegi chapter 6 . 5/30/2012
Humm, I atualy perfer the other writing style. Oh well I think I'll dollow this for now, see how it goes.
| kenegi chapter 5 . 5/30/2012
I laugh at the punt the moogle part. Also I see that you doing things out side of the game mechanisim and making things more realistic.
| kenegi chapter 4 . 5/30/2012
While I like the previous writing style I think I can get use to this. So far I think your doing an grade 7/10, good enough to read but not quite for it to be followed but I'll keep reading. There isn't many FFT fic.
| Anon chapter 6 . 5/30/2012
I'm loving the story so far, keep it up.