Reviews for Happy Birthday
47secondsofveritas chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Uh, hi!

This Alex, In Italian girl who TRANSLATED this very story from English to Italian, because it's so LOVELY! I hope you're ok with it and I think I'll post it into may LJ ( ) obliviously crediting you and giving also the link to the English version

I can even give you a copy of the story if you want, just ask

RMSroswell chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Absolutely amazing. I...I don't even know what to say, this was such a beautiful story. You have a wonderful style of writing, your characterization is spot on and your descriptions are so crystal clear.

Everything in this seemed like it could have been on the show. The dialogue between James and Snow was exactly what I think they would have said. I could hear their voices and see their expressions so clearly in my head. That line “At least he’d know that her hands would be warm” was one of the cutest darn things ever!

The idea of this story is so adorable, it could’ve gotten really cheesy but it didn’t! The mittens? That was one of those moments that makes your face hurt a little from smiling so much! And then you made it worse by secretly putting the ring in it! So now I’m sitting here thinking about how Snow could’ve reacted to finding the ring. You’re a genius! I’ve already finished reading your story and I’m probably going to be thinking about it for a long time afterwards. That is brilliant writing right there! :D

This whole story was just…it was perfect. I can’t give you a single critique, This is definitely in my top five favorite stories of all time. I loved it. Thank you for posting! RMS_Roswell
dracke chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
wow,this fic needs a second chapter NOW !
JeNNiFeR07 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
This is very cute! :) Like this story so much! I hope you write more prince charming/snow white stories!
BloomingViolets chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
You have to write a sequel to this! I want to know how they fall in love! Excellent story!
nicnac918 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Aww how sweet! I love that he didn't just give her the ring, that would have been way to overt and lead to much awkwardness. Instead he hides it inside the mittens, leading to much adorableness.
SassySnow1988 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
AWWW! If that wasn't the cutest thing ever! :-) I so thought the present was gonna be the ring, so I was a little disappointed w/the mittens but then you totally won me back over by having the ring be hidden inside the left mitten. ;-} Great little drabble and I really hope to see more from you w/Snowing.


P.S. Loved your treatment of Charming's "name" James. Not many writers are following that continuity of that not being his real name and you handled it perfectly.
SharonVered chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Aww, the ending was just great! You should turn it into more than a one-shot!
AlwayzOlicity chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Aww, James wanting to find her to tell her Happy Birthday and give her a present. So cute! Loved it!
Chloris chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

Such a sweet, well-written story. The new fandom suits you (or you suit it?).
GrossGirl18 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
This is so sweet! You should make a follow up where she find the ring.
bee chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
wow,this was AMAZING...u should write a second chapter at least..she has to find that ring! really beautiful fic! hope u'll write more Snow/Charming!
Queen Isabella chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
This was wonderful! I thouroughly expected him to give her the ring, but was pleasantly suprised when she opened the package and found mittens. Then to find out that the ring was sewn inside made me all gooey inside. Lovely job!
Daisy chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Great job with the fic! I actually 'Awwed' out loud when I read the line with the ring in the mitten. Thanks for sharing with us.
monroeslittle chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
This was so sweet! I love that he came to see her on her birthday, that she "found" him, and really their whole interaction was so, so wonderful. You captured their banter perfectly, and I like Charming's narration. And I really, really love that he secretly gave her the ring. I would love for something like that to be canon! :)
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