|Reviews for A Jack among Spades|
| Coraline Cat chapter 1 . 9/9
That was pretty good. I hope to see more chapters in the future!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Seriously, continue the story
| Verona-mira chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Wow, this sounds very interessting.
i like the beginning.
when will come more? willl be more there?
| itachi-kun'slover chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
UPDATE! ! And when did it ever say that jack was from 'the void' in the game? Was it in a book or something?
| Hawki chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
-"All for a millennia I have drifted..."
If it's just one, should be "millenium" rather than "millennia."
-I'm afraid this boils down to telling rather than showing, per se. Maybe it is being told, but it's as if we're given one story, then it suddenly cuts to Pain. Could use more emotion and formatting, such as beginning thought on a new line rather than having a single block of text.