|Reviews for Moving On|
| TheRealSonia chapter 1 . 2/21
I know that you haven't finished this story and that you're not likely to finish it after all this time, but I can't help myself. This is well written and intriguing, so I decided to read it anyway.
| Jhill88 chapter 9 . 12/31/2013
ommmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggg the hottest kiss I've read sheesh
| annibelle chapter 21 . 12/5/2013
It looks like you've long abandoned this fic... but I would LOVE to see more! I've been thinking of that sex scene all day... hot hot hot! :)
| AnonymousMe03 chapter 21 . 7/2/2013
Is this story abandoned? :( it was so good!
Thanks for sharing and writing what you have posted though.
Very well written and Daryl and Carol's characters are believably connected to the characters we know from the show.
| pluckysplace chapter 21 . 6/29/2013
I just found this story and am sorry to see you have abandoned it. Really enjoying the story and the relationship between Daryl and Carol. Hope you finish is someday!
| alibabwa chapter 21 . 6/11/2013
This is such a tremendous story that I think I've reread 3 times now and I've only been reading fanfiction for a couple months :) you have such a wonderful, subtle way with language and there always being this almost sarcastic, self-depricatingly twist makes reading your work so enjoyable. I realize it's been months since you've updated and maybe likely you won't, but I figured showing my appreciation for the work you have done was necessary and if you ever wonder if there's still an audience out there wanting more, I promise there is.
| kyri0sity chapter 21 . 4/20/2013
Such a wonderful story! It's so detailed & intricate & has such a lovely feel to it. Hope there's more to come.
| hanagirl chapter 15 . 4/18/2013
Jeez, I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke! That was hot and they haven't even HAD sex yet. Rushing to the next chapter.
| marvelchick chapter 21 . 3/20/2013
Great story, thankfully not super angsty like most Caryl stories I've read (nothing wrong with angst just not my cup of tea ;)) Hope you update soon!
| peonies01 chapter 21 . 2/27/2013
Loving this story! I hope the muses strike you again so it can be continued and finished. But I understand...life and other interests get in the way. Here's hoping inspiration and motivation return one day!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
I've just read this for the 3rd time, please update soon!
| Sira1 chapter 21 . 2/1/2013
Are you still writing this? I really hope so. I love this story so much. I think I'm going to go back and reread it again. Maybe I'll get lucky and by the time I finish, there will be a new chapter. Doubtful, but a girl can dream, right? Thanks for the story and I really do wish for more in the future.
| earthbound68 chapter 21 . 1/28/2013
Please please please update this I am so in suspense! What happened to Shane? Is daryl okay? Will they ever have sex?
| HGRHfan35 chapter 21 . 1/8/2013
Gosh, this is really so good! I do hope you will continue. . . SOON! ;)
| HGRHfan35 chapter 15 . 1/8/2013
Tius is such an intense but samn good story!
***He goes quiet as he comes, barely even seeming to breathe as his body goes from rigid as steel one moment to shuddering like a fevered man the next. His arms lock against her, holding her tight as his forehead digs into her shoulder and his back arches while his legs flex to shove his hips harder and closer against her core. She came from the friction and the thought of how it would feel without the clothing between them; with that driving, pounding push of his cock into her body as his body sought to satisfy the primal urge to procreate by reaching deep into her core to fill her up with his seed.***
That even left me panting for air! ;)