Reviews for WIcked Little Things
gruesomelies chapter 9 . 4/7
This story is very odd. It brings such different feelings out. And they are all strong. Even though I read and enjoy the sappy Paul/Bella imprint stories.. I feel like this story is probably closer to the truth about how each character would have reacted had this taken place.

I LOVE it because it's real. I HATE it because the relationship is quiet disgusting. I LOVE it because you probably got a whole lot of hate mail over it! I HATE it because Paul didn't realize her loved her until he lost everything. I LOVE it because in the end Bella ends up being the heartless one. I HATE it that Bella gained a conscious after she "died". I LOVE it because this lemons are disturbingly arousing.

I love this story I re-visit it a lot. It makes me happy to see an imprint relationship that didn't work out and that could be broken. I'm working on a broken imprint story as well. I'm finding it extremely fun to go down the dark tunnel and fight my way back out. )
hikingurl48 chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Just finished this story and my feelings are so f**ked up I don't know what to say. Powerful yet so heartbreaking Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 9 . 9/7/2014
Wow
wordgirl16 chapter 9 . 7/4/2014
I will NEVER condone Bella for killing her child, but I cant find it in myself to feel sorry for Paul. After 5 years of dehumanizing, humiliating, and ripping away any and every solace she could find in the world, he expects sympathy. Because he finally started to love her a little bit after all of his abuse! He deserves all of the pain she caused him, outside of the innocent baby that got trapped in the destruction of their "relationship" he purposefully caused pain and emotional destruction and has the audacity to be appalled by the effects of his actions...Wonderful Writing! It was nice to read a dark side of Bella
iAnoved chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
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CayStar chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
I loved this! Dark, but Bella was surprisingly the darkest. Beautiful job.
dettyfan chapter 13 . 5/19/2014
Hi, I would like to congratulate you on this story because I think you are a fantastic story teller. It is the first angst story that I have read until the end. The angst and the drama have flowed with such an easiness that require no effort to follow the characters and the plot. Even though the disturbed, tough and troubled storyline. I cried when Jacob told Bella of Charlie's death. I enjoyed that Victoria had not part on this tale. It was a surprise the positive outcome of the Cullens and although I like Paul and I had hoped from the very beginning that he would see the error on his ways soon I followed your line until the end. And even though the dark and difficult turn of events in he remains of the last chapters I found that the characters had acquire grit during the process. Thank you for sharing your story. Have a good day. cheers. :)
Bell 1 chapter 13 . 2/2/2014
I NEVER would have thought this story would go in the direction it did. I'm greatly saddened and upset with the ending. I was hoping, especially after Paul changed with the realization of becoming a father, that they would finally find love and happiness.

Unfortunately, I cannot say I would have read, or finished had I known she didn't end up with Paul.

HOWEVER! I applaud you on the extremely different and vastly unexpected turn of this story. I never would have thought Bella to do what she did to Anthony. Although, I can understand it... to an extent. I mean she spent a long time with Paul's abuse, mistreatment, and utter callousness. It was bound to come to a head eventually.

I kept screaming throughout the story for Bella to stop taking that abuse to "man up" and do something about it. I'm saddened to learn when and how she did though.

To learn that Paul had grown to love her and was willing to try was so encouraging and hopeful. Then the turn of events was shocking and so extremely sad.

As much as I disliked how it turned out, I cannot hate this story because it was well written, unique, and certainly unexpected. Therefore, I will say, thank you for sharing this creative story with us. :D
JlovesGaara chapter 13 . 1/11/2014
Well sheesh. I gotta say, this story has kinda put me off Twilight fanfiction. I may have trouble seeing Bella in any other way now. This was however, an incredibly well written story. Very dark, and so sad. Keep up the wonderful work. Now I gotta go do something happy, thanks for that. LOL
carina2026 chapter 13 . 8/14/2013
Well... I normally abhor a non HEA fic I find your totally well written and a good story. They really didn't have a good imprint. I might feel the same way she did if I never got loving touches and words.
russomaha chapter 13 . 8/7/2013
She suffered... He suffered... They dragged poor Jacob along... And in the end they all died. Gee, the futhor's life must be wa-ay too cheerful. (I mean no offence, little furry cannibals is one of my favourite authors, and it IS a powerful story, just very depressing...)
jacobsgirl007 chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
There is so much I want to say about this final chapter, but I just can't, it's just so sad, It hadn’t been the wolf gene that had made Paul begin to love his wife; it had been the human. why hadn't she tried harder.I just want to say what a outstanding piece of writing this was, you did a fantastic job with it, great story.
Aisha Chalmers chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
I finished reading this on the weekend. Ahhh tragedy! Nooooo. Sigh for the sad ending, but a great fic nonetheless.
AngelisaBlack chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
This was so fricken harsh but I just couldn't stop reading. I was hating Paul throughout most of this until I realized that Bella was just as much to blame for not trying, not talking, not letting go of Ed, for being selfish. At some point I was thinking didn't she get a job? Study? Make friends with anyone? Just fricken I dunno anything?!
In one of your comments you mentioned a car crash and how you can torture yourself with the what if's and dreaming of another ending but really you just need to accept your choices and make the most of it. It was kind of an epiphany moment for me. I just wanted you to know that it helped something slide into place for me about my own life. Bet you didnt think your awesome (but so dark) fic could do that! ;-)
WhackedB chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
Wow. Dark, foreboding. Edward finally did steal her soul - or she really killed it herself. Grim (but great) dark writing.
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